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Comment from Raffaelina Lowcock
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Poor Tania. Where is she? This is certainly turning into a cliff hanger.
The chances that Colin will come back to his apartment are really not too great, but hopefully, he will. That is their only hope of tracking him.
As always it is well written and very interesting.

Ralf

 Comment Written 03-Jan-2021


reply by the author on 04-Jan-2021
    Thank you so much, Ralf, for another lovely review. Ahh, Grant has covered all options. Have a lovely 2021, my friend. Warm hugs. Sandra xx
Comment from robyn corum
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Sandra,

Ooohhh... a second love interest. Nice! When this is over, I expect to be invited to BOTH weddings, you hear? Not a single nit and I enjoyed this post muchly. Thanks!

 Comment Written 03-Jan-2021


reply by the author on 04-Jan-2021
    Hmm, LOL, you would need two hats! You aren't allowed to wear the same one to both. We would notice!!! LOL. Thanks, Robyn. Have a wonderful 2021. Warm hugs. Sandra xxx
Comment from Iza Deleanu
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Poor Monica playing PI without success. Now everything is in Grant's hands, he and his team of mercenaries will get to the bottom of this story. Thank you for sharing and good luck with the next chapter.

 Comment Written 03-Jan-2021


reply by the author on 04-Jan-2021
    Thank you, Iza, for reading this part. The search begins! Have a wonderful 2021, my friend. :)) Sandra xx
Comment from Jaime Deagle
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This piece is well written and engaging. The characters are interesting and the dialogue sounds natural. Overall I enjoyed reading this. Thank you so much for sharing your work.

 Comment Written 03-Jan-2021


reply by the author on 04-Jan-2021
    Thank you, Jamie. :)
Comment from greyson ernst
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nice job you may not be on 1# short story but you are amazing and will be soon and as always keep writing and stay safe to you and yours have a happy 2021


sincerely Greyson Ernst

 Comment Written 03-Jan-2021


reply by the author on 04-Jan-2021
    Thank you, Greyson, for your lovely comments! I was number 1 novelist! So I'm very pleased with that. :)) xx
Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
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You did a great job, Sandra, with this intense chapter. I was thinking the man with the gun was regular police. But the fact he was part of Grant's team he had called in to rescue Tania fits in beautifully. You described the situation of him finding Monica in great detail with equally great imagery. Also, your descriptions of the feelings/thoughts Monica has create great imagery. I could see everything as it unfolded. This chapter was suspenseful and continues throughout. I look forward to the next one.
Thanks for haring.
Respectfully, Jan

 Comment Written 03-Jan-2021


reply by the author on 04-Jan-2021
    Thank you so much, Jan, for your lovely review. That you could put yourself in the picture was such a compliment, and set me up for the day!! Take care, my friend and stay safe. Warm hugs. Sandra xx
Comment from blondie560
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Every week I'm going to give you six stars because you hold my interest and leave me wanting to read more! I was worried that Colin had someone watching near his home, but I was pretty sure it was going to be Grant's security friends. Just a little info-it's Fox in a hen house here. Though I did giggle at chicken hut. Anyway I hope you have a good week. We have a relative nasty week coming up in our political arena, and I hate that I pay too much attention to politics these last four years. Hope you stay healthy. Take care, Sally

 Comment Written 03-Jan-2021


reply by the author on 03-Jan-2021
    Aww, thank you so much, Sally, you have quite made my day, week, no, my year!! What a lovely thing to say. You have really chuffed me up! Your reviews always put a smile on my face, but today it's a huge great grin! Thank you, dear lady, and a big hug for the six shiny stars for this part. Aww. Bless you. Warmest hugs, dear friend. Stay safe and well and have a wonderful New Year! :)) Sandra xx

    We'll be following your political arena here in the UK, as well. Goodness knows what will happen. xxxx
Comment from royowen
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Silly old Monica, but it can be frustrating when one is sitting at home waiting for a call about a missing loved one, when your inactivity gets you down. Beautifully written. Along with Jeff, Grant is likewise concerned about his missing half brother, and Tania. Great story this week Sandra, good writing, blessings Roy

 Comment Written 03-Jan-2021


reply by the author on 03-Jan-2021
    She was a bit silly, wasn't she? But, it's the type of thing I would do. Lol. Thank you, dear Roy for another lovely review. I really appreciate you, my friend. Warm hugs, and lots of love. Sandra xx
reply by royowen on 03-Jan-2021
    Bless you Sandra,
Comment from nancy_e_davis
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It was really foolish for Monica to go out on her own to find Tania. She could had ended up in the same fix as her foster sister. I think Blake and his team are totally able to find Colin and undo his evil scheme. Well done, Sandra.
Nancy:)

 Comment Written 03-Jan-2021


reply by the author on 03-Jan-2021
    Aw, Nancy, thank you! I wasn't expecting a review from you tonight with your eyes so bad. Please take care. Thank you so very much, though, for your lovely review and all the shiny stars. You are a lovely lady!! Warmest hugs, my friend. Love Sandra xxx
Comment from Ric Myworld
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Well, after Monica gets a chance to change her pants, she'll be ready to start searching again. I'm excite to see where the story goes from here. Thanks for sharing. I wish I had a six.

 Comment Written 03-Jan-2021


reply by the author on 03-Jan-2021
    It's funny that you should mention pants, Ric! I'm not tellying you why though! LOL you'll have to wait and see. Thanks, dear friend, for reading this part. I really appreciate you. Warm hugs, and a healthy, happy, 2021. :)) Sandra xx