Comment from Carlos' girl

Excellent

I like. Its an excellent choice of material for this poetic format as it shows the cumulative affect of loss trauma or grief.there is a visceral quality to the words

 Comment Written 05-Feb-2021

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reply by the author on 05-Feb-2021

Thank for your wonderful and encouraging review****kahpot

Comment from duaneculbertson

Excellent

Nice job! I like how the poem starts and ends with devastation. And you satisfy the acrostic criterion with each letter spelling out devastation. I like how the last word in each sentence is the first of the next. Is that a requirement too?
Best,
Dave


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 Comment Written 05-Feb-2021

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reply by the author on 05-Feb-2021

Thank you Dave, I was trying to combine two forms, for the loop poem the last word of a sentence must be the first of the next, much appreciated****kahpot

Comment from donette1914

Excellent

very touching and heartfelt of ones that lost it all
very interesting piece with a wonderful photo to go with your work
your words are so smooth and very well chosen words to make this come to life
your an amazing write and you really make ones think and believable poem



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 Comment Written 05-Feb-2021

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reply by the author on 05-Feb-2021

Thank you for your excellent review****kahpot