Betrayal
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Comment from royowen
So Grant confesses his adoration for Tania, and she knows her attraction for him is quite irreversible. But there is a new menace on the horizon, as well as the problems with Colin, his mother, and a nasty called Rapier. You've really added some excitement to this with Latifah due to drop a baby anytime soon, great episode Sandra, blessings Roy
reply by the author on 19-Apr-2021
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So Grant confesses his adoration for Tania, and she knows her attraction for him is quite irreversible. But there is a new menace on the horizon, as well as the problems with Colin, his mother, and a nasty called Rapier. You've really added some excitement to this with Latifah due to drop a baby anytime soon, great episode Sandra, blessings Roy
Comment Written 18-Apr-2021
reply by the author on 19-Apr-2021
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It's all coming to a head, Roy, not many more chapters to come. Thank you so much for this lovely review, my dear friend. :)) Warm hugs. Sandra xxx
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Well done
Comment from tfawcus
A hurricane. Of course! I wondered how you were going to ginger things up in paradise!
I'm writing this before breakfast. My word, those bacon butties sound tempting. Just the thing to sustain me before Wendy's book group invade the house later this morning.
I am enjoying this and can't wait to see where it goes next.
The remote control wasps are a stroke of genius!
reply by the author on 19-Apr-2021
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A hurricane. Of course! I wondered how you were going to ginger things up in paradise!
I'm writing this before breakfast. My word, those bacon butties sound tempting. Just the thing to sustain me before Wendy's book group invade the house later this morning.
I am enjoying this and can't wait to see where it goes next.
The remote control wasps are a stroke of genius!
Comment Written 18-Apr-2021
reply by the author on 19-Apr-2021
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You'd be surprised how many people wanted to know what bacon butties are. I had one for breakfast! Thank you so much for that lovely gold star, my friend. I'm glad you liked my wasp-spy!! Lol. Warm hugs, Sandra xx
Comment from lyenochka
Aw, now you're just teasing us - Grant and Tania are just about to confess their love for one another and then a hurricane comes! Lol. Great job with this post and I hope they can get off to a safe place but out of sight from Colin and his mother.
I liked the wasp spies. I read that Walmart had even produced mechanical bees to help with pollinating so all this use of bionic bugs are possible!
reply by the author on 18-Apr-2021
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Aw, now you're just teasing us - Grant and Tania are just about to confess their love for one another and then a hurricane comes! Lol. Great job with this post and I hope they can get off to a safe place but out of sight from Colin and his mother.
I liked the wasp spies. I read that Walmart had even produced mechanical bees to help with pollinating so all this use of bionic bugs are possible!
Comment Written 18-Apr-2021
reply by the author on 18-Apr-2021
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I've heard about those pollinating bees too, they do come up with some amazing gadgets now. So the wasp-spies will be everywhere soon! Thank you for this great review, Helen, I really appreciated it. Warm hugs, my friend. Sandra xxx
Comment from BethShelby
This is exciting. Now we have nature to contend with as well. I've seen those little bug like thing that look link insects but are really spies. I can't wait to see how they manage to get them the house. I wish I didn't have to wait a week to see what happens next.
reply by the author on 18-Apr-2021
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This is exciting. Now we have nature to contend with as well. I've seen those little bug like thing that look link insects but are really spies. I can't wait to see how they manage to get them the house. I wish I didn't have to wait a week to see what happens next.
Comment Written 18-Apr-2021
reply by the author on 18-Apr-2021
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Lol, talk about everything getting in on the act, it's such fun! Thank you so much for this lovely review, Beth, I'm glad you enjoyed reading this part. I'm glad you liked my wasp-spies. All the latest technology in this story! Thanks, my friend. :)) Warm hugs. Sandra xx
Comment from Dorothy Farrell
Hello Sandra, this is very well written and very exciting. You always leave the chapter with a cliff-hanger ending, but a hurricane takes the biscuit.
You seem very clued up technically, regarding the wasps. Where did you get that from LOL? A hurricane approaching with them right in its path - you certainly know how to keep the reading interested. A good chapter and a good read. Regards, love Dorothy xxx
reply by the author on 18-Apr-2021
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Hello Sandra, this is very well written and very exciting. You always leave the chapter with a cliff-hanger ending, but a hurricane takes the biscuit.
You seem very clued up technically, regarding the wasps. Where did you get that from LOL? A hurricane approaching with them right in its path - you certainly know how to keep the reading interested. A good chapter and a good read. Regards, love Dorothy xxx
Comment Written 18-Apr-2021
reply by the author on 18-Apr-2021
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Aw, thank you, Dorothy, what a lovely review. Lol, I do like to spice things up a notch. The time frame they are in is hurricane season there, so it had to happen, lol. Thank you so much for the six stars, my friend, I really appreciate both. Warm hugs, love, Sandra xxx
Comment from Ulla
Deare me, Sandra. If it's not one thing then it is the other. Grant and Tania have now found each other and they are both dizzy with happiness. But now a new threat is facing them. A hurricane no less. And their tiny island is right in its path. Deare me, indeed. A big hug. Ulla xxxx
reply by the author on 18-Apr-2021
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Deare me, Sandra. If it's not one thing then it is the other. Grant and Tania have now found each other and they are both dizzy with happiness. But now a new threat is facing them. A hurricane no less. And their tiny island is right in its path. Deare me, indeed. A big hug. Ulla xxxx
Comment Written 18-Apr-2021
reply by the author on 18-Apr-2021
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Thank you so much, Ulla, for another lovely review. I really appreciate that six stars, too. Yes, now I have two romances on the go, a hurricane and a very dodgy person after Grant and Tania. Such fun to sort out!! Lol. Thanks my friend. Warm hugs. Sandra xxx
Comment from Ric Myworld
Well, all the kissing actions in the last chapter and the refresher to start this one, brought back a few old memories. Although, at this point, I'm sure I would need instructions and a map to figure it all out these days. Thanks for sharing.
reply by the author on 18-Apr-2021
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Well, all the kissing actions in the last chapter and the refresher to start this one, brought back a few old memories. Although, at this point, I'm sure I would need instructions and a map to figure it all out these days. Thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 18-Apr-2021
reply by the author on 18-Apr-2021
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Hmm, now I wonder where those memories took you. That's the fun of memories, we can be selective and work them to be the way we want them. I've several!!
Thank you so much for the lovely review, Ric, and that shiny six. Now, you can replace one of your memories and picture me coming to give you a humongous hug! :)) Thanks again, my friend. Sandra xxx
Comment from muffinmama
Oh I'm so glad the misunderstanding didn't drag on and on for 3 chapters and they straightened out their feelings quickly. Of course, that's too easy, so God sent a hurricane just to make sure the tension continued - LOL
In this chapter, I could see the action expanding and new conflicts arising (man vs nature). And the stress re the baby is always just below the surface. The story is moving at a good pace.
Comments:
-In this sentence, did you mean 'raising' and not 'raised'?: "If it wasn't for Monica knowing I'd not just walk off without a word, and raised the alarm, I might not be here today."
-Comma commotion: "...yet, knowing, or, more accurately, not..." no comma after 'yet', and the one after 'or' is not really needed either
Recommendation: In the following, I would use 'drooling' rather than 'dribbling' "...had Jeff and Reg almost dribbling when...", unless it's a British expression?
So much to look forward to in the next chapter!
reply by the author on 18-Apr-2021
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Oh I'm so glad the misunderstanding didn't drag on and on for 3 chapters and they straightened out their feelings quickly. Of course, that's too easy, so God sent a hurricane just to make sure the tension continued - LOL
In this chapter, I could see the action expanding and new conflicts arising (man vs nature). And the stress re the baby is always just below the surface. The story is moving at a good pace.
Comments:
-In this sentence, did you mean 'raising' and not 'raised'?: "If it wasn't for Monica knowing I'd not just walk off without a word, and raised the alarm, I might not be here today."
-Comma commotion: "...yet, knowing, or, more accurately, not..." no comma after 'yet', and the one after 'or' is not really needed either
Recommendation: In the following, I would use 'drooling' rather than 'dribbling' "...had Jeff and Reg almost dribbling when...", unless it's a British expression?
So much to look forward to in the next chapter!
Comment Written 18-Apr-2021
reply by the author on 18-Apr-2021
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Thank you so much Ryma for your lovely review and especially for pointing out those commas, there was a lot in that line, wasn't there? Lol. I've made the corrections. Raising, was right, I was wrong, and I think I must have removed the dribbling because I can't find it now! But your word was better. Was it with the bacon butties? I do that, and then take things out again. Thanks again, my friend, this was a really helpful review. Warm hugs. Sandra xxx
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What are bacon butties? I was drooling for that breakfast!
Hugs back :))
Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
You did a great job with this chapter, Sandra. I like the way you covered 'both sides of the pond.' The addition of the hurricane is plausible and brings with it many possibilities to the story. I knew Grant was infatuated with Tania--in love with her. She knows it too, but is playing 'hard to get.' I hope Latifah will be ok. I see her baby coming while they are all hunkered down from the hurricane, She will give birth at home. Grant's mother is an evil one. It is difficult to know what she has planned, but I believe it will be a doozy. I like the idea of the wasps. Looking forward to the next chapter.
Thanks for sharing.
Respectfully, Jan
reply by the author on 18-Apr-2021
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You did a great job with this chapter, Sandra. I like the way you covered 'both sides of the pond.' The addition of the hurricane is plausible and brings with it many possibilities to the story. I knew Grant was infatuated with Tania--in love with her. She knows it too, but is playing 'hard to get.' I hope Latifah will be ok. I see her baby coming while they are all hunkered down from the hurricane, She will give birth at home. Grant's mother is an evil one. It is difficult to know what she has planned, but I believe it will be a doozy. I like the idea of the wasps. Looking forward to the next chapter.
Thanks for sharing.
Respectfully, Jan
Comment Written 18-Apr-2021
reply by the author on 18-Apr-2021
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Thank you so much for this lovely review, Jan. You have sussed out a few things very well, but I won't tell you which ones!! Lol. I'm just so happy that you are still enjoying my story. Thanks, my friend. :)) Sandra xxx
Comment from nancy_e_davis
Lots going on. Tell me, what are Bacon Butties? I have never heard of such. LOL The little wasps sound interesting. I am glad they are there to protect Monica. Now a Hurricane can be added to the problems at hand. Grant and Tania now have a romantic connection. Well done, Sandra. Nancy:)
reply by the author on 18-Apr-2021
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Lots going on. Tell me, what are Bacon Butties? I have never heard of such. LOL The little wasps sound interesting. I am glad they are there to protect Monica. Now a Hurricane can be added to the problems at hand. Grant and Tania now have a romantic connection. Well done, Sandra. Nancy:)
Comment Written 18-Apr-2021
reply by the author on 18-Apr-2021
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A bacon buttie is a sandwich with loads of crisp grilled bacon inside, lol. I might have to put it in my author's notes. When I was checking this part over this morning, I said to Graham we must have a bacon buttie for lunch, and he agreed. It was delicious.
Thank you, dear Nancy, for this lovely review. Everything is coming to a head now. Warm hugs, my friend. Sandra xxx
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Yeah! We add lettuce and tomato and call it a B.L.T. Bacon, Lettuce, Tomato, sandwich. Love them! xxx Nancy!
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Yeah! We add lettuce and tomato and call it a B.L.T. Bacon, Lettuce, Tomato, sandwich. Love them! xxx Nancy! On toast of course!
