Comment from Dolly'sPoems

Excellent

Fine words here as we need the support when we are in crisis and our belief becomes stronger as we rely on hope and faith, you won my vote here, love Dolly x

 Comment Written 06-Jul-2021

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reply by the author on 06-Jul-2021

Hi Dolly,

Oh thank you very much for your wonderful words and review. I am delighted, thank you!

reply by the author on 06-Jul-2021

Hi Dolly,

Oh thank you very much for your wonderful words and review. I am delighted, thank you!

Comment from Elizabeth Emerald

Excellent

Elegant and powerful profession of faith--unexpected--and well conceived!--choice of prodding--gives a refreshing twist on the standard imagery of faith.

 Comment Written 05-Jul-2021

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reply by the author on 06-Jul-2021

Hi Elizabeth,

Thank you so very much for your wonderfully encouraging review.

Your comments are always welcome!

reply by the author on 06-Jul-2021

Hi Elizabeth,

Thank you so very much for your wonderfully encouraging review.

Your comments are always welcome!

Comment from tempeste

Excellent

Ciao mystery poet,

I gave you your 9 th vote.

Despite I DO believe in God , I have to be honest , I call on HIS help and support when I am going through a rough patch ..

I wish I were more constant in my faith and praise God even when my life is going well.

Keep safe!

 Comment Written 05-Jul-2021

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reply by the author on 06-Jul-2021

Hi Tempest,

I know, I too wish I were more consistent with my faith. I think we can all strive to be more thankful when life is tripping along nicely :-)

Thank you for your grand review and comments ? and your vote!

It is very appreciated ❤️

reply by the author on 06-Jul-2021

Hi Tempest,

I know, I too wish I were more consistent with my faith. I think we can all strive to be more thankful when life is tripping along nicely :-)

Thank you for your grand review and comments ? and your vote!

It is very appreciated ❤️

reply by tempeste on 07-Jul-2021

You are welcome!

Comment from Katie Mae Dead

Excellent

Excellent entry for the contest. Live how your first 2 lines flow so smoothly. Nice alliteration between "faith" and "finds"
Best wishes with this strong entry!
Katiemae

 Comment Written 05-Jul-2021

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reply by the author on 06-Jul-2021

Thank you for your wonderful review and thoughts. Very much appreciate your time to review.

reply by the author on 06-Jul-2021

Thank you for your wonderful review and thoughts. Very much appreciate your time to review.

Comment from Robert Zimmerman

Excellent

Hello mystery writer.

Your 5- 7- 5 poem certainly meets the style standard for the contest. The idea of an "unexpected" faith that presents itself in the day it is needed can affect you by stimulating or prodding your belief is a well stated concept.

good luck in the contest period

Robert

 Comment Written 05-Jul-2021

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reply by the author on 06-Jul-2021

Hi Robert,

Thanks for a very grand review and comments and well wishes, too :-)

reply by the author on 06-Jul-2021

Hi Robert,

Thanks for a very grand review and comments and well wishes, too :-)

reply by Robert Zimmerman on 06-Jul-2021

You're welcome.

Comment from Raul1

Excellent

I really think that this poem is well written. I like this kind of poetry. Well thought out. Excellent work! No mistakes found. Thank you for sharing! Good luck in the contest!

 Comment Written 05-Jul-2021

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reply by the author on 06-Jul-2021

Hi Raul,

You are too kind. Thank you very much for your review and thoughts :-)

reply by the author on 06-Jul-2021

Hi Raul,

You are too kind. Thank you very much for your review and thoughts :-)

Comment from Jannypan (Jan)

Excellent

You did a great job with your contest entry, Mystery Author. I enjoyed reading it. I love your image choice. Your words are well chosen, the syllable count is correct, and your message is clear. Best wishes.
Thanks for sharing.
Respectfully, Jan

 Comment Written 05-Jul-2021

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reply by the author on 06-Jul-2021

Hi Jan,

Thank you so much for an excellent review and thoughts. So appreciated!

reply by the author on 06-Jul-2021

Hi Jan,

Thank you so much for an excellent review and thoughts. So appreciated!

Comment from Mia Twysted

Excellent

Your faith moves the world around you. It asks you to accept in and believe. You give it your trust and you shall receive so much more in return.

 Comment Written 05-Jul-2021

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reply by the author on 06-Jul-2021

Hi Mia,

Thanks for a super review and wonderful thoughts. I so appreciate your time to critique my work.

reply by the author on 06-Jul-2021

Hi Mia,

Thanks for a super review and wonderful thoughts. I so appreciate your time to critique my work.

Comment from Joanne Gill-Maddick

Excellent

This is a nicely written poem for faith entry. Nice overall presentation. Beautiful photo to compliment your words as well . Good luck in the contest.

 Comment Written 05-Jul-2021

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reply by the author on 06-Jul-2021

Hi Joanne,

Thanks so much for such a super review and thoughts on my poem. Very appreciated on this holiday weekend :-)

reply by the author on 06-Jul-2021

Hi Joanne,

Thanks so much for such a super review and thoughts on my poem. Very appreciated on this holiday weekend :-)

Comment from MissMerri

Excellent

A very succinct and well-phrased poem of faith. You have used your seventeen syllables to express a beautiful and inspiring thought. I really enjoyed your poem. Best wishes in the contest.

 Comment Written 05-Jul-2021

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reply by the author on 06-Jul-2021

Hi Miss Merri,

A beautiful review and sweet thoughts made my day. Thank you very much!

reply by the author on 06-Jul-2021

Hi Miss Merri,

A beautiful review and sweet thoughts made my day. Thank you very much!