ABC's of Life
Ways We Can Enjoy Life31 total reviews
Comment from Anne Johnston
Well done on this ABC poem. Great advice for everyone to follow, listen to God, be kind and thoughtful, be thankful and be kind to your friends. Take time to enjoy life.
reply by the author on 08-Sep-2021
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Well done on this ABC poem. Great advice for everyone to follow, listen to God, be kind and thoughtful, be thankful and be kind to your friends. Take time to enjoy life.
Comment Written 08-Sep-2021
reply by the author on 08-Sep-2021
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Thanks.
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You are welcome
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Do you know what it means to write a poem for a child? That is what it says in the children's rhyming poem contest.
Comment from royowen
I can remember watching movies with my girls, and now my granddaughter, we often liked similar things, it must be my inner child, I read to them and made up stories, (the little girls in the stories were always like them) then we'd pray together, it was a good time in my life. They are wives and mums themselves now. Beautifully written my friend, blessings Roy
reply by the author on 08-Sep-2021
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I can remember watching movies with my girls, and now my granddaughter, we often liked similar things, it must be my inner child, I read to them and made up stories, (the little girls in the stories were always like them) then we'd pray together, it was a good time in my life. They are wives and mums themselves now. Beautifully written my friend, blessings Roy
Comment Written 08-Sep-2021
reply by the author on 08-Sep-2021
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Thanks, do you live in Australia?
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I confess I do, Adelaide, in the middle, down south.
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When you said mum gave me that impression
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An English thing too.
Comment from Janice Canerdy
Your rhyming ABC poem is skillfully and creatively written, expressive, upifting, and delightful. The advice you give is excellent; following it would surely make the world a different place, if all followed.
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Your rhyming ABC poem is skillfully and creatively written, expressive, upifting, and delightful. The advice you give is excellent; following it would surely make the world a different place, if all followed.
Comment Written 08-Sep-2021
reply by the author on 08-Sep-2021
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Thanks!
Comment from barbara.wilkey
Thank you for sharing this contest entry. I enjoyed reading and your wisdom shines through loud and clear. These are very good lessons that we could all benefit from. Good luck with the contest.
reply by the author on 08-Sep-2021
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Thank you for sharing this contest entry. I enjoyed reading and your wisdom shines through loud and clear. These are very good lessons that we could all benefit from. Good luck with the contest.
Comment Written 08-Sep-2021
reply by the author on 08-Sep-2021
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Thanks very much!
Comment from Paul McFarland
Very good advice for youngsters. As a matter of fact, it is good advice for oldsters, too. The last line seems to give me a different feeling from the first four. Do you think it needs a rewrite?
reply by the author on 08-Sep-2021
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Very good advice for youngsters. As a matter of fact, it is good advice for oldsters, too. The last line seems to give me a different feeling from the first four. Do you think it needs a rewrite?
Comment Written 08-Sep-2021
reply by the author on 08-Sep-2021
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The last line is the best I could do, what do you suggest?
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"Heed your conscience, come what may" pops into my mind, but there are more lines, I'm sure.
Comment from Sharon Haiste
I think this is a good entry for the ABC Poetry Contest.
Your short, spiritual poem is nicely rhymed and has a good message.
Well done and I wish you good luck with the contest.
Sharon
reply by the author on 08-Sep-2021
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I think this is a good entry for the ABC Poetry Contest.
Your short, spiritual poem is nicely rhymed and has a good message.
Well done and I wish you good luck with the contest.
Sharon
Comment Written 08-Sep-2021
reply by the author on 08-Sep-2021
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Thanks very much
Comment from Sherry Asbury
This is a jaunty and happy poem. It offers us wisdom on how we should consider living our lives happily, which is a real blessing. By looking at your picture I can see a smiling face of serenity.
reply by the author on 08-Sep-2021
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This is a jaunty and happy poem. It offers us wisdom on how we should consider living our lives happily, which is a real blessing. By looking at your picture I can see a smiling face of serenity.
Comment Written 08-Sep-2021
reply by the author on 08-Sep-2021
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Thank you!
Comment from Sally Law
This is great advice in ABC poetry form, dear poetess. Thank you for sharing this beautiful and colorful poem with us. A blessing for my writing day.
Sending you my best today as always, and best wishes for the upcoming contest,
Sally XOs
reply by the author on 08-Sep-2021
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This is great advice in ABC poetry form, dear poetess. Thank you for sharing this beautiful and colorful poem with us. A blessing for my writing day.
Sending you my best today as always, and best wishes for the upcoming contest,
Sally XOs
Comment Written 08-Sep-2021
reply by the author on 08-Sep-2021
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Thank you!
Comment from Pam (respa)
-Very nice artwork.
-You wrote a good poem
with good examples and rhyme.
-You chose a good title, and
the poem reflects many good
ways to have a good life
with good friends, faith,
and enjoying life, too.
-Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 08-Sep-2021
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-Very nice artwork.
-You wrote a good poem
with good examples and rhyme.
-You chose a good title, and
the poem reflects many good
ways to have a good life
with good friends, faith,
and enjoying life, too.
-Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 08-Sep-2021
reply by the author on 08-Sep-2021
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Thanks!
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You are welcome.
Comment from LisaMay
These are all very important aspects of how to lead a good life and enjoy it - in touch with God, thinking of others, being grateful, having friendships, and putting humour in our lives.
reply by the author on 08-Sep-2021
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These are all very important aspects of how to lead a good life and enjoy it - in touch with God, thinking of others, being grateful, having friendships, and putting humour in our lives.
Comment Written 08-Sep-2021
reply by the author on 08-Sep-2021
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Yes. Thanks.
