God On Dell
God orders a gift of rebirth40 total reviews
Comment from pome lover
Al, that is some story.
I'm glad it had a good ending.
I wonder what made you think of Dell to get gifted rebirth by God?
Fascinating.
Congratulations on being recognized.
Best wishes,
Katharine - pome lover
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Al, that is some story.
I'm glad it had a good ending.
I wonder what made you think of Dell to get gifted rebirth by God?
Fascinating.
Congratulations on being recognized.
Best wishes,
Katharine - pome lover
Comment Written 08-Feb-2022
Comment from Melodie Michelle
Perfect entry for the
21 Word Spiritual Fiction writing prompt and best of wishes in the contest my friend!
It's difficult to write a short story that makes sense but you have done it!!!
Bravo!!! Thanxxx for sharing!
Blessings ...
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Perfect entry for the
21 Word Spiritual Fiction writing prompt and best of wishes in the contest my friend!
It's difficult to write a short story that makes sense but you have done it!!!
Bravo!!! Thanxxx for sharing!
Blessings ...
Comment Written 08-Feb-2022
Comment from Benny Beeharry
Hi if this is true, it is always sad to lose someone one knows well. The prayer is therefore that he goes to heaven following an angel and stay with God. Let it be so . God bless
Benny Beeharry
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Hi if this is true, it is always sad to lose someone one knows well. The prayer is therefore that he goes to heaven following an angel and stay with God. Let it be so . God bless
Benny Beeharry
Comment Written 08-Feb-2022
Comment from Katherine M. (k-11)
Dell came back to birth extremely rapidly after death. Was that really a gift, or a punishment? Also I don't understand the relevance of coronavirus to this story. Couldn't it have been death from any cause? I feel this is just a word-padder.
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Dell came back to birth extremely rapidly after death. Was that really a gift, or a punishment? Also I don't understand the relevance of coronavirus to this story. Couldn't it have been death from any cause? I feel this is just a word-padder.
Comment Written 08-Feb-2022
Comment from lancellot
Well, these micro stories are popping out like chicken pox. A new one begins before the old one is done. Well the three words are used again and there are only there sentences. This meets the contest requirements, but 21 words are leaning more to poetry than a complete story.
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Well, these micro stories are popping out like chicken pox. A new one begins before the old one is done. Well the three words are used again and there are only there sentences. This meets the contest requirements, but 21 words are leaning more to poetry than a complete story.
Comment Written 08-Feb-2022
Comment from barbara.wilkey
This poem is extremely similar to the poem on Deen, I read yesterday. Thank you for sharing this writing prompt entry with us. COVID is a causing problems in the US. I am wondering exactly why. I am not buying what the media is telling us.
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This poem is extremely similar to the poem on Deen, I read yesterday. Thank you for sharing this writing prompt entry with us. COVID is a causing problems in the US. I am wondering exactly why. I am not buying what the media is telling us.
Comment Written 08-Feb-2022
Comment from Jay Squires
An interesting piece, Alcreator Litt Dear. And you've accompanied it with a most intriguing picture with scrolls, angels, stairs leading to light, and not oddly, a director at the bottom, keeping order, eschewing chaos. He was just doing his job when he gave Dell another shot at anonymity. Good luck.
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An interesting piece, Alcreator Litt Dear. And you've accompanied it with a most intriguing picture with scrolls, angels, stairs leading to light, and not oddly, a director at the bottom, keeping order, eschewing chaos. He was just doing his job when he gave Dell another shot at anonymity. Good luck.
Comment Written 08-Feb-2022
Comment from LateBloomer
Hello Alcreator. Well done spiritual fiction. Your message is clear.
Of special note:
God gifted Dell a rebirth.
(Everlasting life)
Well chosen artwork. Accurate word count. As this is a writing prompt entry, I wish you good luck. LateBloomer
reply by the author on 08-Feb-2022
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Hello Alcreator. Well done spiritual fiction. Your message is clear.
Of special note:
God gifted Dell a rebirth.
(Everlasting life)
Well chosen artwork. Accurate word count. As this is a writing prompt entry, I wish you good luck. LateBloomer
Comment Written 08-Feb-2022
reply by the author on 08-Feb-2022
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Thank you for writing this; I am sorry, I do not understand your words and points:
Of special note:
God gifted Dell a rebirth.
(Everlasting life)
Please, please, please explain and clarify your words, points, note.
I want to learn from you.
Please clarify your points.
You are wise and able to explain your own words, please write your explanation and or clarification at your earliest so that I can learn the truth.
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Ahhh... It must have been early or late. I meant eternal life. I think that will clarify it. Sorry about that. Thanks for asking. LateBloomer
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Thank you for the courtesy. What makes you to meant eternal life. Unnecessarily, assuming, presuming, guessing about something not the author writes or means but you have taken undue advantage of presumption, re-view means to check and viewing the author's word or expression and not to paste a reviewer's own knowledge, own assumption beyond the writing, I am not pleading my work, you are a wise person but you made such a word and this is unfair, a reviewer should not assume and write something else author does not write or mention and by writing such word you have just put me in dilemma. You are wise so I do not teach you that all wars, court cases, clashes, riots and losses man invites by using words assumingly, by writing or expressing wrong and assumed words wrongly. Please do not hurt. I am not commenting or teaching you, I have expressed truth/facts, you have caused me losses but I forget, none can control fate. We conclude and I feel happy. Maybe you did something good. With the kindest personal regards,
Thanks for replying,
I do believe and practice the words: To err is human, to forgive is divine.
Sorry if I wrote something not to hurt you. I forget the matter.
God bless you.
ALCREATOR LITT DEAR
(Daniel Ray)
09/02/2022
Comment from the13thpoet
Hello Alcreator Litt Dear, I hope this review finds you well. Conveying a message in 21 words is quite the challenge. I think you executed well. Good job and good luck. Have a great day!
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Hello Alcreator Litt Dear, I hope this review finds you well. Conveying a message in 21 words is quite the challenge. I think you executed well. Good job and good luck. Have a great day!
Comment Written 08-Feb-2022
Comment from dmt1967
This is a really good story about a good and kind lord. I like the picture and the highlighted words gave this piece more power. Good luck in the contest and thank you for sharing.
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This is a really good story about a good and kind lord. I like the picture and the highlighted words gave this piece more power. Good luck in the contest and thank you for sharing.
Comment Written 08-Feb-2022