The Writings of a Mouse
Viewing comments for Chapter 4 "Lillian"Pieces of my Heart
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Comment from Cristine22
Well, that definitely made me smile, so it's a good choice for the contest. I like the last line about enjoying the time you have with her now. It's sad that dogs don't live as long as we do, but it's so great to get the time that we do. Great job and good luck.
reply by the author on 10-Mar-2022
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Well, that definitely made me smile, so it's a good choice for the contest. I like the last line about enjoying the time you have with her now. It's sad that dogs don't live as long as we do, but it's so great to get the time that we do. Great job and good luck.
Comment Written 10-Mar-2022
reply by the author on 10-Mar-2022
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Thank you so very much for the nice review and for the well wishes!
Comment from Carolyn Dooley
You have a great and warming story in a poem. Enjoy her while you can.
According to old sayings, dogs are our best friend. They will stay with you through thick and thin. Thank you for the great poem.
reply by the author on 10-Mar-2022
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You have a great and warming story in a poem. Enjoy her while you can.
According to old sayings, dogs are our best friend. They will stay with you through thick and thin. Thank you for the great poem.
Comment Written 10-Mar-2022
reply by the author on 10-Mar-2022
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Thank you so much for the excellent review and for taking the time to read.
Comment from Tom Horonzy
It's a dog? One Hundred Forty two lns? Irish Wolfhound? I feel the same re:y "Buddy" 28 lbs Bearded Collie. 13 yrs old. Been the same weight for 10+ years. Chases our cows whenever He can,
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reply by the author on 10-Mar-2022
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It's a dog? One Hundred Forty two lns? Irish Wolfhound? I feel the same re:y "Buddy" 28 lbs Bearded Collie. 13 yrs old. Been the same weight for 10+ years. Chases our cows whenever He can,
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Comment Written 10-Mar-2022
reply by the author on 10-Mar-2022
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She?s an Old English Mastiff. Love of my life. Thanks so much for the excellent review Tom!
Comment from in777wr#
This is a nice tribute to you dog. You heartfelt poem reads, and flows well. Understandable emotions flows throughout the poem concerning you pet. I shaved enjoyed reading your poem.
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This is a nice tribute to you dog. You heartfelt poem reads, and flows well. Understandable emotions flows throughout the poem concerning you pet. I shaved enjoyed reading your poem.
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Comment Written 10-Mar-2022
reply by the author on 10-Mar-2022
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Thank you so very much!
