Earth's Magnificent Moon
Viewing comments for Chapter 1 "Earth's Moon"Poems, stories and fact about about our moon.
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Comment from K.L. Rockquemore
This is a well written poem and enjoyable to read.
Check your sentence that describes what the poem is about, I think you have an extra "the" there.
Your presentation is appropriate and adds life to your descriptive writing.
reply by the author on 25-Mar-2022
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This is a well written poem and enjoyable to read.
Check your sentence that describes what the poem is about, I think you have an extra "the" there.
Your presentation is appropriate and adds life to your descriptive writing.
Comment Written 23-Mar-2022
reply by the author on 25-Mar-2022
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Thank you so much for the review and comments on my poem and for noticing the extra word.
Comment from Debi Pick Marquette
This was a beautifully written chronological alphabetical poem! (I know that's not really the name of it) But anyway, you put it all together so nice, that it made sense & left me with a gorgeous picture in my head, as you explained each phase. Nice job!
reply by the author on 25-Mar-2022
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This was a beautifully written chronological alphabetical poem! (I know that's not really the name of it) But anyway, you put it all together so nice, that it made sense & left me with a gorgeous picture in my head, as you explained each phase. Nice job!
Comment Written 23-Mar-2022
reply by the author on 25-Mar-2022
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Thank you so much Debi, I really appreciate the review and great comments.
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You are so very welcome
Comment from LisaMay
It's always interesting to see what writers do with X.
Your use of Xanadu as an idealised place fits right in with the lunar imagery you have woven into your poem, which flows seamlessly due to how well constructed your lines are.
reply by the author on 25-Mar-2022
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It's always interesting to see what writers do with X.
Your use of Xanadu as an idealised place fits right in with the lunar imagery you have woven into your poem, which flows seamlessly due to how well constructed your lines are.
Comment Written 23-Mar-2022
reply by the author on 25-Mar-2022
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Thank you so much LisaMay. I'm pleased that you think Xanadu worked. The X words are not easy to find a place for. I appreciate the review and comments.
Comment from jessizero
You did a great job with this prompt. The moon is a great topic for this, and you are a great writer. Thank you for sharing this with the rest of us. Best wishes in the contest.
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reply by the author on 24-Mar-2022
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You did a great job with this prompt. The moon is a great topic for this, and you are a great writer. Thank you for sharing this with the rest of us. Best wishes in the contest.
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Comment Written 23-Mar-2022
reply by the author on 24-Mar-2022
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Thank you for reviewing this poem and for nice comments. They are appreciated.
