War Free World
4 Line Poem 2 4 4 12 Syllable Dedicated to Wise Men to Act 444 total reviews
Comment from Mia Twysted
The spirits of the world work in mysterious ways. I do not believe they can just fix the world without taking away our free will. But I do believe they help those that want a better world find the strength to fight for it.
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The spirits of the world work in mysterious ways. I do not believe they can just fix the world without taking away our free will. But I do believe they help those that want a better world find the strength to fight for it.
Comment Written 01-Apr-2022
Comment from judiverse
Would that we could have world peace. It seems that from the beginning of time there have always been power-hunger rulers have gone to war hoping to increase the amount of land they own. Sometimes it's hard to keep the peace even within one's own country. We must pray that Russia's war in Ukraine will end soon. There's been so much suffering and death already. judi
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Would that we could have world peace. It seems that from the beginning of time there have always been power-hunger rulers have gone to war hoping to increase the amount of land they own. Sometimes it's hard to keep the peace even within one's own country. We must pray that Russia's war in Ukraine will end soon. There's been so much suffering and death already. judi
Comment Written 01-Apr-2022
Comment from Eternal Muse
An excellent message here. Wars should not be allowed, God should veto it. Nothing is worth a loss of one human life. I will pray hard that wars end for all time.
A great poem. Thank you.
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An excellent message here. Wars should not be allowed, God should veto it. Nothing is worth a loss of one human life. I will pray hard that wars end for all time.
A great poem. Thank you.
Comment Written 01-Apr-2022
Comment from Teri7
This is a very well written 2-4-4-12 poem you have penned my friend. You used very good heartfelt words and very good imagery. Thank you for the notes that I read. Best wishes in the contest. Blessings,Teri
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This is a very well written 2-4-4-12 poem you have penned my friend. You used very good heartfelt words and very good imagery. Thank you for the notes that I read. Best wishes in the contest. Blessings,Teri
Comment Written 01-Apr-2022
Comment from barbara.wilkey
I pray daily for world peace, and I do believe God can achieve. I don't understand all the working of God, I'm not supposed to, I'm not God. God works in mysterious ways and in His own time. Thank you for sharing.
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I pray daily for world peace, and I do believe God can achieve. I don't understand all the working of God, I'm not supposed to, I'm not God. God works in mysterious ways and in His own time. Thank you for sharing.
Comment Written 01-Apr-2022
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
If only we could have a war free earth, alas man loves to be at war with someone and peace is something we often dream of, an uplifting write and are you sure all your instructions are needed here? Love Dolly x
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If only we could have a war free earth, alas man loves to be at war with someone and peace is something we often dream of, an uplifting write and are you sure all your instructions are needed here? Love Dolly x
Comment Written 01-Apr-2022
Comment from rspoet
Hello Alcreator,
This is an excellent four line poem in the 2-4-4-12 form.
Obviously, God could stop all wars if He was so inclined.
The fact that he doesn't suggests He expects man to do so.
Unfortunately, man has fallen quite short of expectations.
Best wishes.
Robert
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Hello Alcreator,
This is an excellent four line poem in the 2-4-4-12 form.
Obviously, God could stop all wars if He was so inclined.
The fact that he doesn't suggests He expects man to do so.
Unfortunately, man has fallen quite short of expectations.
Best wishes.
Robert
Comment Written 01-Apr-2022
Comment from RGstar
Well, I agree with you in a sense that your statement reads true. War has no purpose except to remember those that fall victim.
Men make wars, so the men have to be stopped, and if God can stop them, all well and good.
No more wars.
My best wishes.
RGstar
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Well, I agree with you in a sense that your statement reads true. War has no purpose except to remember those that fall victim.
Men make wars, so the men have to be stopped, and if God can stop them, all well and good.
No more wars.
My best wishes.
RGstar
Comment Written 01-Apr-2022
Comment from Carolyn Dooley
This reminds me of the beetles. They talked about peace back in the sixties. Music, posters, word of mouth, etc. No matter which way we go, we need peace. Without peace, we are all doomed.
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This reminds me of the beetles. They talked about peace back in the sixties. Music, posters, word of mouth, etc. No matter which way we go, we need peace. Without peace, we are all doomed.
Comment Written 01-Apr-2022
Comment from Sanku
Very relevant message .But unfortunately God's words are falling on deaf ears.Man's greed is not satiated.. God has to punish these war mongers .I certainly pray for a warless world.
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Very relevant message .But unfortunately God's words are falling on deaf ears.Man's greed is not satiated.. God has to punish these war mongers .I certainly pray for a warless world.
Comment Written 01-Apr-2022