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FanStory Dream

Waking from a dream

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Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
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Excellent entry for the 75 Word Flash writing prompt contest. The word count looks good. You have a beginning, a middle, and an end as required.

Hahaha... I love your sense of humor. I had done something like that. I get great ideas in the middle of the night but the next day it wasn't so great. LoL

Good luck in the contest.

Gypsy

 Comment Written 07-Apr-2022


reply by the author on 07-Apr-2022
    Gypsy, Thank you very much!
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
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I often seen a gaggle of geese and I know full well they are called this because they certainly do make an awful noise when they get going! You made me smile, love Dolly x

 Comment Written 07-Apr-2022


reply by the author on 07-Apr-2022
    Thank you very much!
Comment from Mia Twysted
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I tend to write things down when I am half asleep for stories I think would be great, but then when I wake up the next day I can't seem to remember what my notes mean.

 Comment Written 07-Apr-2022


reply by the author on 07-Apr-2022
    I do know that feeling, thanks for reading!
Comment from pome lover
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That's funny, except it's maddening, too.
Maybe if you sleep on it, again? I'm wracking my brain trying to think of what a gaggle of geese would make you think of, and all I can think of is a lot of honking.
Cute picture, though :) Good luck.
Katharine
They didn't attack somebody in your dream, did they?

 Comment Written 07-Apr-2022


reply by the author on 07-Apr-2022
    I remember, nothing...LOL, Thanks for reading!
reply by pome lover on 07-Apr-2022
    oh, well. the best laid dreams... :)
Comment from Bridge
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A well written story. I loved the humorous tone, at least it made me smile. I sure would have liked to know what the story was. All the best to you in the contest.
With regards

 Comment Written 07-Apr-2022


reply by the author on 07-Apr-2022
    LOL, I would like to know what that story was too! Thanks for reading.
Comment from the13thpoet
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Hello Mystery writer a good day to you. I hope this finds you well. Thank you for sharing your 75 word flash entry you executed the word count perfectly. Good job and good luck!

 Comment Written 07-Apr-2022


reply by the author on 07-Apr-2022
    Thank you very much, and good day to you as well!
Comment from Anne Johnston
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What a great entry for this contest. You have told a story that resonates with all of us in just a few words. How often, do we wake up, trying so hard to remember the wonderful ideas that came to us in a dream?

 Comment Written 07-Apr-2022


reply by the author on 07-Apr-2022
    Thank you!
reply by Anne Johnston on 07-Apr-2022
    You are welcome
Comment from RPSaxena
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Hello Friend,
Nice piece of Humor Fiction meeting the desired norms, and beautifully depicting your lovely dream!
Lucid as well as perfectly matching the theme phraseology.
Captivating flow throughout from the beginning to the end.
Picture complements the theme.
Good Luck in the contest.

 Comment Written 07-Apr-2022


reply by the author on 07-Apr-2022
    Thank you very much!
reply by RPSaxena on 07-Apr-2022
    Most Welcome!
Comment from mermaids
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I like how this is a dream. I can relate to your words. Often in a dream, I have an idea but do not remember it when I wake up. Creative story here and I do not know what a gaggle of geese is either.

 Comment Written 07-Apr-2022


reply by the author on 07-Apr-2022
    Thank you!
Comment from Wendy G
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Well that's very different! And why not? Now you have us all wondering what was the story about the gaggle of geese! Best wishes for your entry in the Flash contest.
Wendy

 Comment Written 07-Apr-2022


reply by the author on 07-Apr-2022
    Wendy, Thank you and the gaggle of geese thanks you as well!