Rejection
It Is The Worst Feeling29 total reviews
Comment from Bridge
A very powerful poem. It tells of the effect rejection has. Very well written. I really enjoyed reading it. Thanks for sharing. All the best to you in the contest
With regards
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A very powerful poem. It tells of the effect rejection has. Very well written. I really enjoyed reading it. Thanks for sharing. All the best to you in the contest
With regards
Comment Written 29-Apr-2022
Comment from Tom Horonzy
I understand what you shave written but like even better what you say in your author notes: "Never allow another's opinion or acceptance of you to define either who you are or who you are not."
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I understand what you shave written but like even better what you say in your author notes: "Never allow another's opinion or acceptance of you to define either who you are or who you are not."
Comment Written 29-Apr-2022
Comment from jwsteele
I like how you described this pain. I admire your courage and how you resolved to go on. From here no heart worth keeping is not scarred deep. Thank you for sharing.
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I like how you described this pain. I admire your courage and how you resolved to go on. From here no heart worth keeping is not scarred deep. Thank you for sharing.
Comment Written 29-Apr-2022
Comment from Shirley McLain
You did a good job with your Tanka Poem. It certainly painted a vivid picture in my mind. The art work you put with your poem perfectly fits the concept of your poem perfectly. Have a great day. Shirley
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You did a good job with your Tanka Poem. It certainly painted a vivid picture in my mind. The art work you put with your poem perfectly fits the concept of your poem perfectly. Have a great day. Shirley
Comment Written 29-Apr-2022
Comment from Kim Kinakin Tuckey
I really liked this poem. It was definitely full of emotion. The message is an excellent one and it is a great lesson for all. I am new to poetry and had to look up what a Tanka poem was so i learned something. Thank you.
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I really liked this poem. It was definitely full of emotion. The message is an excellent one and it is a great lesson for all. I am new to poetry and had to look up what a Tanka poem was so i learned something. Thank you.
Comment Written 29-Apr-2022
Comment from Eliz T.
I really like the honesty of this poem. Also really liked how your use of different font colour gave the poem a second message that drove it home. Stay real and thanks for sharing!
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I really like the honesty of this poem. Also really liked how your use of different font colour gave the poem a second message that drove it home. Stay real and thanks for sharing!
Comment Written 29-Apr-2022
Comment from Gloria ....
Excellent subject material with strong emotive language. My only suggestion here is to maintain the 5/7/5/7/7 format to meet the requirements of the CEC.
An easy repair I am sure, and I wish you much luck with the Contest Committee. :)
Gloria
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reply by the author on 29-Apr-2022
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Excellent subject material with strong emotive language. My only suggestion here is to maintain the 5/7/5/7/7 format to meet the requirements of the CEC.
An easy repair I am sure, and I wish you much luck with the Contest Committee. :)
Gloria
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Comment Written 28-Apr-2022
reply by the author on 29-Apr-2022
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Awesome! Thank you, Gloria for your advice. I really appreciate you taking time to read, review and rate my work.
Comment from Janilou
"Don't be upset when people reject you. Nice things are rejected all the time by people who can't afford them."
Wow. Those are powerful words. Your poem is touching and beautiful. I loved it.
Thanks for sharing.
All the best,
Jan
reply by the author on 29-Apr-2022
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"Don't be upset when people reject you. Nice things are rejected all the time by people who can't afford them."
Wow. Those are powerful words. Your poem is touching and beautiful. I loved it.
Thanks for sharing.
All the best,
Jan
Comment Written 28-Apr-2022
reply by the author on 29-Apr-2022
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Awesome! Jan, I am humbled by your review. Thanks so much for your thoughtful remarks and stellar review.
Comment from K.L. Rockquemore
This is well written and well presented.
Your writing is wildly emotional leaving a powerful message that I hope all of your readers will receive.
Never let someone define you, don't give them that power..... keep it for yourself.
Thanks for sharing.
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reply by the author on 29-Apr-2022
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This is well written and well presented.
Your writing is wildly emotional leaving a powerful message that I hope all of your readers will receive.
Never let someone define you, don't give them that power..... keep it for yourself.
Thanks for sharing.
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Comment Written 28-Apr-2022
reply by the author on 29-Apr-2022
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Awesome! K L Rockquemore, I always appreciate your keen insight and words of encouragement.
