Bubbles in the Wind
Viewing comments for Chapter 1 "A Bit of Loving Advice"Tenitive name of Poetry Book.
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Comment from mermaids
Excellent love poem that shows how love takes time to grow. Excellent advice here. Your poetic form is smooth and flows like the ocean who arrives on shore and then retreats back. I like your line about butterflies who often flit away to savor other flavors. Vivid imagery here.
reply by the author on 28-Jun-2022
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Excellent love poem that shows how love takes time to grow. Excellent advice here. Your poetic form is smooth and flows like the ocean who arrives on shore and then retreats back. I like your line about butterflies who often flit away to savor other flavors. Vivid imagery here.
Comment Written 28-Jun-2022
reply by the author on 28-Jun-2022
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Thank you for the review and stars. I really enjoyed your comments.
Beth
Comment from RodG
I like this love poem where the Speaker gives good practical advice about going slow in choosing a mate. I especially like these analogies: that love is a precious present that should be carefully unwrapped and love is like an intersection, not a one-way street. Rod
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I like this love poem where the Speaker gives good practical advice about going slow in choosing a mate. I especially like these analogies: that love is a precious present that should be carefully unwrapped and love is like an intersection, not a one-way street. Rod
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Comment Written 28-Jun-2022
reply by the author on 28-Jun-2022
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Thank you Rod, I appreciate the review and comments. I like that you commented on a couple of lines you especially liked.
Beth
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My pleasure.
Comment from Theodore McDowell
Nice post for the contest. Great advice. Love at first sight is a myth. It takes time for love to grow into real intimacy and commitment, as you so eloquently say. Well done.
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Nice post for the contest. Great advice. Love at first sight is a myth. It takes time for love to grow into real intimacy and commitment, as you so eloquently say. Well done.
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Comment Written 28-Jun-2022
reply by the author on 28-Jun-2022
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Thank you, Ted. I'm sure some won't agree with my advice, but maybe I was more cautions that more. LOL
Beth
