Santa's New Christmas Plan
Santa goes modern.37 total reviews
Comment from LJbutterfly
OMG!!! This story is so engrossing I want to give it ALL of my sixes for the week. I'm a former early childhood teacher and still like fairytales and children's stories. This should definitely be a book with vivid pictures, or an animated short film. I can't express how much I enjoyed the detail and development of this story.
Terry, you have been a real asset to this website. Thank you.
reply by the author on 11-Dec-2022
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OMG!!! This story is so engrossing I want to give it ALL of my sixes for the week. I'm a former early childhood teacher and still like fairytales and children's stories. This should definitely be a book with vivid pictures, or an animated short film. I can't express how much I enjoyed the detail and development of this story.
Terry, you have been a real asset to this website. Thank you.
Comment Written 11-Dec-2022
reply by the author on 11-Dec-2022
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Thank for the six stars. This was my first effort at fantasy story writing, and it was a fun write for me. Thanks, Terry.
Comment from Tpa
A wild and creative imagination, which I'm sure will put you in a high rank in the contest. Indeed, the SANTA CUP would be a spectacular on FOX SPORTS, and I'm sure Santa's journey would make a nice NETFIX flick.
Merry Christmas & GOOD LUCK IN THE CONTEST.
reply by the author on 11-Dec-2022
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A wild and creative imagination, which I'm sure will put you in a high rank in the contest. Indeed, the SANTA CUP would be a spectacular on FOX SPORTS, and I'm sure Santa's journey would make a nice NETFIX flick.
Merry Christmas & GOOD LUCK IN THE CONTEST.
Comment Written 11-Dec-2022
reply by the author on 11-Dec-2022
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Thank you for the review, I love it! Terry.
Comment from barbara.wilkey
Thank you for sharing this contest entry with us. My major question is over Australia Santa doesn't use reindeers but kangaroos. I didn't notice an exchange station for them. He might want to add that to his plan. LOL I enjoyed reading and good luck.
reply by the author on 11-Dec-2022
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Thank you for sharing this contest entry with us. My major question is over Australia Santa doesn't use reindeers but kangaroos. I didn't notice an exchange station for them. He might want to add that to his plan. LOL I enjoyed reading and good luck.
Comment Written 11-Dec-2022
reply by the author on 11-Dec-2022
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Wendy is on it. LOL. Barbara, thanks for reading. Terry
Comment from susand3022
I love this detailed account of Santa's Christmas run! It's such fun. Then again right now I'm loving anything Santa related. :) I love that you gave him a new way to use his magic to cut his time down. I would think he would need it, especially now with the population being so much larger than it was when he first began making his runs. :)
Such a fun read.
Susan :)
reply by the author on 11-Dec-2022
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I love this detailed account of Santa's Christmas run! It's such fun. Then again right now I'm loving anything Santa related. :) I love that you gave him a new way to use his magic to cut his time down. I would think he would need it, especially now with the population being so much larger than it was when he first began making his runs. :)
Such a fun read.
Susan :)
Comment Written 11-Dec-2022
reply by the author on 11-Dec-2022
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Thank you for reading, it was a very fun write for me. Terry.
Comment from nomi338
You have an amazing mind, an incredible imagination, and a remarkable talent for story telling. I pray that you never lose your gifts or that they ever are diminished. If that should ever happen, the world will lose an awesome blessing.
reply by the author on 11-Dec-2022
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You have an amazing mind, an incredible imagination, and a remarkable talent for story telling. I pray that you never lose your gifts or that they ever are diminished. If that should ever happen, the world will lose an awesome blessing.
Comment Written 11-Dec-2022
reply by the author on 11-Dec-2022
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Nomi, thank you for the six stars! This story was a complete departure for me. I had never tried anything like this before. I admit I had fun writing it. Thank you for your wonderful review. Terry.
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Heartfelt my brother. Heartfelt and sincere.
Comment from evilynne
What a wonderful flight of imagination. So glad Santa and the elves managed to update the delivery system! Hope many and wonderful gifts will come your way this year and, of course, I wish you the best of luck in the contest! Evi
reply by the author on 11-Dec-2022
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What a wonderful flight of imagination. So glad Santa and the elves managed to update the delivery system! Hope many and wonderful gifts will come your way this year and, of course, I wish you the best of luck in the contest! Evi
Comment Written 11-Dec-2022
reply by the author on 11-Dec-2022
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Evi, thank you for the wonderful six stars! I am delighted you enjoyed this story. Terry.
Comment from Begin Again
Awesome! A story filled with magic, innovation and the season for cheer to fascinate young and old.I am thrilled to see that Santa is always looking to improve the experience since our "tech-savvy" youngsters are always filled with so many doubting questions these days. I believe you have a winner in this one! A very enjoyable read!
Smiles, Carol
reply by the author on 11-Dec-2022
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Awesome! A story filled with magic, innovation and the season for cheer to fascinate young and old.I am thrilled to see that Santa is always looking to improve the experience since our "tech-savvy" youngsters are always filled with so many doubting questions these days. I believe you have a winner in this one! A very enjoyable read!
Smiles, Carol
Comment Written 11-Dec-2022
reply by the author on 11-Dec-2022
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Carol, Thank you for the six stars, I am glad you found the story fun! Terry.
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Entertaining and well deserved!
Comment from John Ciarmello
Ho, Ho, Ho! This is a creative and imaginative presentation with the magic that only Terry Twinklestar can deliver (no pun intended). I enjoyed this upgrade to Santa's delivery system and all the characters involved. Best, JohnC.
reply by the author on 11-Dec-2022
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Ho, Ho, Ho! This is a creative and imaginative presentation with the magic that only Terry Twinklestar can deliver (no pun intended). I enjoyed this upgrade to Santa's delivery system and all the characters involved. Best, JohnC.
Comment Written 11-Dec-2022
reply by the author on 11-Dec-2022
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John, Thank you for reading and for your review. Terry.
Comment from Tom Horonzy
I have always been a humbug of a guy when it comes to the season. I'm better today because I need not run around to shop any longer. Our girls are grown, no progeny have been birthed and they are in their thirties, and if the wife or I need anything then we should have bought it. Still, I wish you Season's Greetings.
reply by the author on 11-Dec-2022
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I have always been a humbug of a guy when it comes to the season. I'm better today because I need not run around to shop any longer. Our girls are grown, no progeny have been birthed and they are in their thirties, and if the wife or I need anything then we should have bought it. Still, I wish you Season's Greetings.
Comment Written 11-Dec-2022
reply by the author on 11-Dec-2022
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Tom, thank you for reading and Merry and happy to you. Terry.
Comment from royowen
What a great name Terry Twinklestar, I like the idea of Tiny Tim turning up for Christmas Day, and the hiring of a spaceship to fly over Texas. I liked this most imaginative Christmas, and I expect to see a few more before Christmas, well done, blessings Roy
reply by the author on 11-Dec-2022
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What a great name Terry Twinklestar, I like the idea of Tiny Tim turning up for Christmas Day, and the hiring of a spaceship to fly over Texas. I liked this most imaginative Christmas, and I expect to see a few more before Christmas, well done, blessings Roy
Comment Written 11-Dec-2022
reply by the author on 11-Dec-2022
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Roy, thank you for reading my story, and Happy holidays to you. Terry.
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You too Terry
