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End of the war letter

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Comment from Elodie Richardson
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Beautiful story. This certainly tugs at my heart strings, especially as a daughter with a father whose writing has an eerily similar style. It's heartfelt and personal, but clearly exhausted and eager in the way that I imagine well encapsulates the emotions of someone who would write such a letter.

 Comment Written 05-Nov-2022


reply by the author on 06-Nov-2022
    Thank you, Elodie, for your kind comments and review. I truly appreciate your kind words.
    Best wishes
    Mary
Comment from Katherine M. (k-11)
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This is a very poignant letter to mark the armistice celebration. A drama is just starting on TV about the German POWs held in England at the end of the war, in the first two minutes the topic of them being used to work in England "as reparation" was brought up... I think it's terrible when the common man is made to pay for the behaviour/choices of his leaders. Power is an evil tool that corrupts, and absolte power corrupts absolutely, so the common man ends up paying the price of corruption. Small wonder he world's in such a mess. Thanks for sharing. Kate xx

 Comment Written 05-Nov-2022


reply by the author on 06-Nov-2022
    Kate, Thank you for your review. I never heard of these "reparations," and truthfully was a little shocked that the Western world held them hostage. I agree with you completely.
    Best wishes and regards,
    Mary
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
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Hello, Mary, what a beautiful and heartwarming story. The fact that is based on true war stories makes it even better. I feel bad for all the soldiers in both sides. How horrible to fight in a war for your country and punished after the war for not winning. People can be so cruel.

Well done!

 Comment Written 05-Nov-2022


reply by the author on 06-Nov-2022
    Thank you Gypsy. I appreciate your very kind words and review.
    I appreciate and thank you for the six stars.
    Best wishes and regards,
    Mary
Comment from royowen
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We were friends with a German teacher who was very young when captured by the Russians, after Siberia, he finished up working on a farm in England, he was returned to Germany, and made his way here, he was a lovely bloke, well done Mary, blessings Roy

 Comment Written 05-Nov-2022


reply by the author on 06-Nov-2022
    Thank you, Roy, I appreciate your review. Thank you for the six-stars, I am honored.
    Blessings,
    Mary
reply by royowen on 06-Nov-2022
    Most welcome Mary
Comment from Douglas Goff
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Wow, what a very interesting piece of history.

Men like your father were a blessing! They protected the earth from an evil like no other before it.

Good story. Thanks for sharing this peek into the past!

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 Comment Written 05-Nov-2022


reply by the author on 06-Nov-2022
    Thank you Douglas for your review and very kind words. I appreciate it.
    Best regards,
    Mary
reply by Douglas Goff on 06-Nov-2022
    Thank you. Stories about men like your father are important.
Comment from lancellot
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This is an interesting letter. Perhaps, a story about the POWs that were forced into slave labor. That would be interesting.

notes:

Thus, the name, {He} is over six feet and skinny with dark eyes and hair, not the superman Hitler was looking for.

-he

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 Comment Written 05-Nov-2022


reply by the author on 05-Nov-2022
    Thank you for your comments and review
    I appreciate it, plus the correction.
    Best wishes
    Mary