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Comment from royowen
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Oh yes I must agree with you. A adore Christian women, because of their tenderness, their great compassion and passion, the way they appreciate God's nurturing grace and love, they embody the feminine side of God, (yes, God embodies both the wonder of His own creative expression in Adam and Eve's original condition, men and women, in unity, are the full bodily revelation of God) beautifully written Debi, blessings Roy

 Comment Written 17-Mar-2023


reply by the author on 18-Mar-2023
    Once again Roy, you give such awesome words of our Lord's wisdom, and always with such kindness of my work and the girls that this is a tribute for.
    I just realized tonight that this is the first anniversary of my first post. And I always carry those kind words of encouragement that I should keep plucking away at it and it will all come together. Well I notice that you haven't said that to me for a long time, because you have replaced that with words of praise and honor for my work, and after God, there is nobody I enjoy pleasing more than my Christian brother. So thank you for always believing in me and encouraging because I am happier than I ever thought possible doing what I love. Thank you again for that, dear dear friend.
reply by royowen on 18-Mar-2023
    Bless you dear girl
Comment from Raul1
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A nice setting for women writers in FanStory to tell them they are all great. A touching tribute to all of them. Exceptional work! No mistakes found in your poem. Thank you for sharing!

 Comment Written 17-Mar-2023


reply by the author on 18-Mar-2023
    Thank you from the bottom of my heart Raul for such a wonderful review of the ladies here for Women in History month. I so appreciate your very kind words and gracious gift of six stars too. Thanks again! And as I write this I always remember that you were my very first fan, and how appropriate since today is the anniversary of my very first post. Thanks again dear friend.
Comment from Joanne Gill-Maddick
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Another beautiful poem Debbi. How sweet to write a poem for the women of fan story. They are all so great here. Including you. Great pic to compliment your words. Well done. :)

 Comment Written 17-Mar-2023

Comment from Cherish Adams
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Debi, your posts are always positive. I love that and your humor is a bonus. This is a beautiful poem with a beautiful message. Thank you for sharing your love and love for words with us.

 Comment Written 17-Mar-2023

Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
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You did a great job, Debu, with your tribute to the women
of FS. The monorhyme worked well throughout. Your words
were descriptive and smooth flowing. I liked how this included
every woman on the site. Of course, we are women first and
writers second or third etc. The image was perfect as was the
color scheme. Your words were straight from your heart--and
YOU are included with the women of FS. I believe every one of
them can see themselves in your well-chosen words. We are a
family.
Thanks for sharing, Jan

 Comment Written 17-Mar-2023


reply by the author on 18-Mar-2023
    Hey Hon, not sure how I lost this one, but I had responded a couple hours ago, and not sure what happened unless I hit next page instead of save.
    Anyways thanks for your kind words for this poem for yourself and so many other special women.
Comment from Mintybee
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That was a really good tribute to the women of Fanstory. It's also an impressive monorhyme. It's hard to do monorhymes that long, and you did it with very little finagling to make the lines flow naturally. This was enjoyable to read.
Mintybee

 Comment Written 17-Mar-2023

Comment from papa55mike
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We do have a family on Fanstory that's very encouraging and helpful. We share vast amounts of love, too many. What a wonderfully written tribute. I wish I had a six for you. Best of luck with your writing!

Have a great day, and God bless.
mike

 Comment Written 17-Mar-2023

Comment from dragonpoet
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Hi Debi,
All this is so true and can be said about the men here too. There have been a few mean reviews, but 99% of the time they are encouraging and uplifting. You are right about spreading the faith here too.
Have a great day and weekend.
If you would like to know, I will be celebrating my birthday on Sunday.
Joan

 Comment Written 17-Mar-2023


reply by the author on 17-Mar-2023
    Believe me I know about some of that 1% but focus on people like you and others that I care so much about and the positive. However having such strong emotions that make me put myself out there so often, I love easily, but get hurt easily too. So I just focus on the good. Thanks for such an awesome review sweetie! Means so much to me.

    I hope you don't mind but would like to write a little something for you for Sunday. I have another one that was already planned but can get them both out. However if you don't mind, can I ask you a couple questions so I can add a little about you. However anything you don't want in your poem is completely up to you. Just let me know. Ok?
    What City again in MN? trying to determine how far away we are. I know its not more than an hour tho.
    What decade of years are you in?
    Martial status? How many years? Kids, grandkids?
    Interests, duh? I mean besides writing?
    Anything you want to add I would love to know? even if you say you don't want it in your poem.
    Thanks Hon!
reply by dragonpoet on 18-Mar-2023
    I agree that if you love easily, you also get hurt easily. Keep to the positive is always the best way.
    I am married for 37 years on June. I have two adult children. One son and one daughter. Daughter is married. No grandchildren. I like reading, crossword and other word puzzles and jigsaw puzzles. I would rather not give the exact city for safety purposes but I like in the suburbs of Minneapolis.
    I have 3 sisters and one brother.
    Joan
reply by the author on 18-Mar-2023
    Thank you so much Joan. I feel like I know you so much better already, yet we have known each other for so long.
    I feel the same way about exposing your city, but that was just for my knowing. And yet, for some reason I want to think you told me once it was Bloomington? I also never give name, unless a first name is necessary, and most of the info that I ask for is, in case it comes to where I need it for a line that says her boy and girl. Or something like that because you know me it is about rhyming but still staying on meter and honor the person who I am writing about. I have already done one to release tomorrow about I will have yours done too. It is an honor that I look forward to.
    Thank you again sweet friend. See ya tomorrow.
reply by dragonpoet on 18-Mar-2023
    You're welcome,
Comment from nomi338
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While I join you in celebrating all of the outstanding women of FanStory Ville. I dare attempt to speak for the men when I say, Hooray for the women, our beloved sisters. We would not have nearly as much fun as we do without the presence of the women. Why does a man do half the things he does? Because he is trying to impress a woman, why else. We will jump through hoops, bend over backwards, turn ourselves inside out just to make you smile. In short, we love you and would never want you to go away.

 Comment Written 17-Mar-2023

Comment from jenintorre
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I really enjoyed reading your poem. Your words are so true but remember there are also some great male fanstorians.
A very good write. Best wishes. Jen.

 Comment Written 17-Mar-2023


reply by the author on 17-Mar-2023
    Oh yes, Jen I know, but not sure if you read the notes in the description, but this is for Women's History Month. And will do one for them too, but have written many that have included them already. I just love telling people how I feel. I believe that is why God sent me here. I do appreciate your kind comments so much dear friend, so thank you so much.