You'd Better Hide
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Comment from Alexandra Trovato
I did not guess it. lol This is excellent work. Your presentation is very good. You use expressive words and colorful imagery that will draw in a readers.
Best wishes,
Alexandra
reply by the author on 28-Oct-2023
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I did not guess it. lol This is excellent work. Your presentation is very good. You use expressive words and colorful imagery that will draw in a readers.
Best wishes,
Alexandra
Comment Written 28-Oct-2023
reply by the author on 28-Oct-2023
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Hope it wasn't too frightening until you realized!
Comment from Spitfire
Ha, Ha. So clever. The narrator is talking about pumpkins of course. They are plentiful and oh, how are sadistic self loves to carve holes in them.
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Ha, Ha. So clever. The narrator is talking about pumpkins of course. They are plentiful and oh, how are sadistic self loves to carve holes in them.
Comment Written 28-Oct-2023
reply by the author on 28-Oct-2023
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Yep. You gotta feel for those pumpkins. Thanks for the great review and all the stars, Shari.
Comment from Debbie D'Arcy
Well, this one isn't for children but for Halloween starved adults who just can't get enough of all the blood and gore! You definitely let rip here, Jim, and your verse excellently reflected the horror of the visual and the theme of the season. Well done! Debbie
reply by the author on 28-Oct-2023
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Well, this one isn't for children but for Halloween starved adults who just can't get enough of all the blood and gore! You definitely let rip here, Jim, and your verse excellently reflected the horror of the visual and the theme of the season. Well done! Debbie
Comment Written 28-Oct-2023
reply by the author on 28-Oct-2023
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I helped my grandson carve a pumpkin yesterday, and that's what gave me the idea for this poem. I started feeling sorry for the pumpkins and thought it might help to warn them.
Comment from Wayne Fowler
I rarely review poetry, but this one is clever. I got it, but not until the third stanza. Great flow and rhythm. And nice rhyming. Good work.
Best wishes.
reply by the author on 28-Oct-2023
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I rarely review poetry, but this one is clever. I got it, but not until the third stanza. Great flow and rhythm. And nice rhyming. Good work.
Best wishes.
Comment Written 28-Oct-2023
reply by the author on 28-Oct-2023
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Thanks, Wayne. Good for you!
Comment from jim vecchio
I never used to think I'm smart, but I did guess it before the end. It was as simple as pie. Ouch! That aside, it was a delightful entry for this contest and should make it to the top.
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reply by the author on 28-Oct-2023
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I never used to think I'm smart, but I did guess it before the end. It was as simple as pie. Ouch! That aside, it was a delightful entry for this contest and should make it to the top.
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Comment Written 28-Oct-2023
reply by the author on 28-Oct-2023
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Good job there, Jim. Not everyone got it. Glad you enjoyed it.
Comment from Tom Horonzy
I was glad to see you release another something other than the book in progress. A varied twist and in the nick of time for All Saints Day. I wonder hoiw it got that moniker?
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reply by the author on 28-Oct-2023
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I was glad to see you release another something other than the book in progress. A varied twist and in the nick of time for All Saints Day. I wonder hoiw it got that moniker?
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Comment Written 28-Oct-2023
reply by the author on 28-Oct-2023
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Starting to write a little more poetry now as I'm nearing the end of the story.
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Good
Luck
