Hope
Light in the Dark40 total reviews
Comment from Wendyanne
Wow this is such a powerful message! You have described hope so well with just a few well chosen words!! We are all praying for some light to be shone in these very dark days!! Good luck!!
reply by the author on 12-Dec-2023
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Wow this is such a powerful message! You have described hope so well with just a few well chosen words!! We are all praying for some light to be shone in these very dark days!! Good luck!!
Comment Written 12-Dec-2023
reply by the author on 12-Dec-2023
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Thank you so much, Wendyanne!
Comment from Lisasview
I really love the use of the word HOPE... it conveys so much and is always such a great title for a poem. I too used it once...awhile back...
Hope is all we really need ...right?
Lisasview
reply by the author on 12-Dec-2023
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I really love the use of the word HOPE... it conveys so much and is always such a great title for a poem. I too used it once...awhile back...
Hope is all we really need ...right?
Lisasview
Comment Written 12-Dec-2023
reply by the author on 12-Dec-2023
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Thank you so much, Lisa!
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So very welcome
Lisa
Comment from Rachelle Allen
Gorgeous. This is a BEAUTIFUL poem. So much said in so few words...a trademark of a gifted writer, indeed. I bet this one will do great in the contest. Good luck to you, Mystery Writer. xo
reply by the author on 12-Dec-2023
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Gorgeous. This is a BEAUTIFUL poem. So much said in so few words...a trademark of a gifted writer, indeed. I bet this one will do great in the contest. Good luck to you, Mystery Writer. xo
Comment Written 11-Dec-2023
reply by the author on 12-Dec-2023
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Thank you so much for a wonderful review!
Comment from jim vecchio
This is one of the best 2-4-6 entries I've read. I predict top of the list for you! These contests are fun and teach a lot about syllables. Not everyone can write such a poignant one as you.
reply by the author on 12-Dec-2023
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This is one of the best 2-4-6 entries I've read. I predict top of the list for you! These contests are fun and teach a lot about syllables. Not everyone can write such a poignant one as you.
Comment Written 11-Dec-2023
reply by the author on 12-Dec-2023
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Thank you so much, Jim! Greatly appreciated.
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You and others teach me a lot about meter, rhyme, and syllables.
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You and others teach me a lot about meter, rhyme, and syllables.
Comment from Pam (respa)
-Very nice image and presentation.
-The syllable count is good, along with the topic.
-Good description and rhyme.
-A positive message about the hope
that prayers can bring and that they
will "light the way" for a much better world.
-It can't come soon enough.
-I appreciate your entry; good luck!!
reply by the author on 12-Dec-2023
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-Very nice image and presentation.
-The syllable count is good, along with the topic.
-Good description and rhyme.
-A positive message about the hope
that prayers can bring and that they
will "light the way" for a much better world.
-It can't come soon enough.
-I appreciate your entry; good luck!!
Comment Written 11-Dec-2023
reply by the author on 12-Dec-2023
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Thank you so much, Pam!
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You are welcome.
Comment from harmony13
The author's words are engaging, descriptive and creative. Thank
you for the author's notes - prayers are so much needed. The first two
lines flow and connect well. The last line says it all! The artwork is precious and compliments this poem well. I really enjoyed the last line
because without hope where would we be! Great Poem!
reply by the author on 11-Dec-2023
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The author's words are engaging, descriptive and creative. Thank
you for the author's notes - prayers are so much needed. The first two
lines flow and connect well. The last line says it all! The artwork is precious and compliments this poem well. I really enjoyed the last line
because without hope where would we be! Great Poem!
Comment Written 11-Dec-2023
reply by the author on 11-Dec-2023
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Thank you so much for such a kind and thoughtful review!
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
Being in a dark place is a very sad place to be and I have experienced it in grief on occasions, a fine post, finding the light is uplifting, fine words here, love Dolly x x x x
reply by the author on 11-Dec-2023
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Being in a dark place is a very sad place to be and I have experienced it in grief on occasions, a fine post, finding the light is uplifting, fine words here, love Dolly x x x x
Comment Written 11-Dec-2023
reply by the author on 11-Dec-2023
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Thank you so much, Dolly!
Comment from gramalot8
This poem is a great entry for the 2-4-6 poetry contest.
I have shed tears a few times watching the coverage of the innocent citizens... especially the children... that hsve been affected by the war between Gaza and Israel. And I have offered prayers as well.
Thanks for sharing your thoughts with us.
reply by the author on 11-Dec-2023
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This poem is a great entry for the 2-4-6 poetry contest.
I have shed tears a few times watching the coverage of the innocent citizens... especially the children... that hsve been affected by the war between Gaza and Israel. And I have offered prayers as well.
Thanks for sharing your thoughts with us.
Comment Written 11-Dec-2023
reply by the author on 11-Dec-2023
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Thank you so much for this kind review and thoughts which I greatly appreciate!
Comment from Jacob1395
In dark times, hope is the one thing that makes life worth living, and that's why it is such a powerful force. A well written piece. I thought your writing flowed well and I enjoyed reading it.
reply by the author on 11-Dec-2023
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In dark times, hope is the one thing that makes life worth living, and that's why it is such a powerful force. A well written piece. I thought your writing flowed well and I enjoyed reading it.
Comment Written 11-Dec-2023
reply by the author on 11-Dec-2023
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Thank you so much, Jacob!
Comment from Raul1
All we can do is hope our lives turn out good and our families well. Interesting and impressive. Excellent work! Well done. Well written. No mistakes found in your poem. Thank you for sharing!
reply by the author on 11-Dec-2023
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All we can do is hope our lives turn out good and our families well. Interesting and impressive. Excellent work! Well done. Well written. No mistakes found in your poem. Thank you for sharing!
Comment Written 11-Dec-2023
reply by the author on 11-Dec-2023
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Thank you so much, Raul for this lovely review!
