Comment from Brett Matthew West

Excellent

Appears you won the practical joke contest at the expense of "Calvin" croaking.

There are many words scattered throughout the piece that are capitalized and should not be.

 Comment Written 17-Jan-2024

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reply by the author on 17-Jan-2024

I have Grammarly. Does nothing work these days? Thanks for the read. Karen

Comment from Wayne Fowler

Excellent

I love the ending. Great work.
He was apoplectic, - apoplectic????? Great word. Great job!
Good luck in the contest.

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 Comment Written 17-Jan-2024

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reply by the author on 17-Jan-2024

I had to check my spelling on that to be sure, I hadn't used it in a while. Thanks for the read and kind words. It is a good word isn't it? :-) Karen

Comment from Debbie D'Arcy

Excellent

Yes well in fairness, he deserved that, extreme though it was! A very original ending in your favourite genre in which you excel. Well done and good luck in the contest! Debbie

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 Comment Written 17-Jan-2024

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reply by the author on 17-Jan-2024

Boy, you turn my head. I am smiling from ear to ear. I thank you for the read, and kind words. Karen