Pop The Cherry
A saga of epic proportions and nonsensical merriment.26 total reviews
Comment from Lisasview
Well, I have decided it best if I do not enter this contest as I feel that the is the winner...for sure.
Excellent ~ hysterical write dear mystery writer...
No luck needed to win...youv'e got this!!
Lisasview
reply by the author on 01-Mar-2024
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Well, I have decided it best if I do not enter this contest as I feel that the is the winner...for sure.
Excellent ~ hysterical write dear mystery writer...
No luck needed to win...youv'e got this!!
Lisasview
Comment Written 05-Feb-2024
reply by the author on 01-Mar-2024
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Appreciate the kind words but on FS you never know. We shall see. Blessings! You
Comment from Liz O'Neill
This sound of crisis will draw the reader in. : "The Cherry's not on it, Boss." Tom's voice sounded hollow over the phone." this is fun. I actually put most of my friends in my books. Tor had the most. but they were beheaded...ooof: " Looks like Karen brought in a couple of her own heavy hitters." "Oh no, not . . . Lyenochka and Karenina?" And Jessizero as the driver...this is great.
reply by the author on 01-Mar-2024
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This sound of crisis will draw the reader in. : "The Cherry's not on it, Boss." Tom's voice sounded hollow over the phone." this is fun. I actually put most of my friends in my books. Tor had the most. but they were beheaded...ooof: " Looks like Karen brought in a couple of her own heavy hitters." "Oh no, not . . . Lyenochka and Karenina?" And Jessizero as the driver...this is great.
Comment Written 05-Feb-2024
reply by the author on 01-Mar-2024
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Thanks, Liz. I had fun with this one. Unfortunately, the dead can not vote.
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I just had my 77th sunset strip birthday
and fortunately I'm still alive.
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We are better for knowing you!
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Thank you. I appreciate positive members on here
Comment from Debbie D'Arcy
I love it! I've been looking for these entries and have only found one previously (stiff competition). But this is equally hilarious and had me laughing all the way through. Love all the names especially The Cherry and the three Ds. The plot is great allowing for the shambolic 'planning' of this assassination and, frankly, this could easily be made into a book for me. It was such fun. Well done to the mystery writer and good luck! Debbie
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reply by the author on 01-Mar-2024
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I love it! I've been looking for these entries and have only found one previously (stiff competition). But this is equally hilarious and had me laughing all the way through. Love all the names especially The Cherry and the three Ds. The plot is great allowing for the shambolic 'planning' of this assassination and, frankly, this could easily be made into a book for me. It was such fun. Well done to the mystery writer and good luck! Debbie
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Comment Written 04-Feb-2024
reply by the author on 01-Mar-2024
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Thank you, Debbie. I really enjoyed killing Karen, and everyone else.
Comment from LJbutterfly
This is a creative, adventurous, and humorous story, and Karen still didn't die. I most enjoyed reading a story that included FanStory writers as characters. The three Ds was a good one. You have a very vivid imagination, and I wish you the best of luck in the contest.
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reply by the author on 01-Mar-2024
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This is a creative, adventurous, and humorous story, and Karen still didn't die. I most enjoyed reading a story that included FanStory writers as characters. The three Ds was a good one. You have a very vivid imagination, and I wish you the best of luck in the contest.
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Comment Written 04-Feb-2024
reply by the author on 01-Mar-2024
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Thank you! If only the dead could vote! Ha!
Comment from kiwisteveh
Funniest thing I've read in the last year so definitely gets a Six from me.
I had my doubts about that title at first but warmed to it as the story went on. Throwing a few FS personalities under the flaming oxy-torch helped and there will be many of us fuming that we didn't get a mention!
Good luck!
Steve
reply by the author on 01-Mar-2024
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Funniest thing I've read in the last year so definitely gets a Six from me.
I had my doubts about that title at first but warmed to it as the story went on. Throwing a few FS personalities under the flaming oxy-torch helped and there will be many of us fuming that we didn't get a mention!
Good luck!
Steve
Comment Written 04-Feb-2024
reply by the author on 01-Mar-2024
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Thanks, Steve. Your first sentence really made my day. Eliciting emotions is what writing is all about. A ribbon or two are always a bonus! HA!
Comment from Julie Helms
The story is really funny and super creative! With a touch of innuendo, matching pantsuits, and a surprise ending, you keep the reader's attention through the end. Bam!
Well done! Julie
reply by the author on 01-Mar-2024
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The story is really funny and super creative! With a touch of innuendo, matching pantsuits, and a surprise ending, you keep the reader's attention through the end. Bam!
Well done! Julie
Comment Written 04-Feb-2024
reply by the author on 01-Mar-2024
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Thanks, Julie! I do think this is the first time you have sixed me. That means a lot coming from your very keen eye! Appreciate you!
