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Tell Me It Ain't True!

A Misunderstood Gift

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Comment from Esther Brown
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Was a 6 but I am feeling stingy because I have them all given by Tuesday...smile. Those things kids say...precious. As a fellow grandma...I need to get in gear and send more cards. Letters and cards were such a great way to surprise those we love. Esther

 Comment Written 06-May-2024


reply by the author on 06-May-2024
    Not a problem, Esther. Just glad that you enjoyed the little flash. It was an easy write and enjoyable too. Have a great day!
Comment from rspoet
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This is an excellent flash story for the contest
with a nice touch of humor and surprise.
Children will say unexpected things, from their own point of view.
Nicely done.
Good luck in the contest.
Robert

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 Comment Written 06-May-2024


reply by the author on 06-May-2024
    Thanks so much...Yes, they are small and their thoughts work on different wave lengths than ours. I know I gasp at some of the things my grandchildren think are real. Have a great day!
Comment from Mark Jackson
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Touching and sweet a lovely short tale told with skill. I enjoy reading these they are short and yet can still pack quite a lot of story for there weight. Good luck in the contest.

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 Comment Written 06-May-2024


reply by the author on 06-May-2024
    I thank you for your review and kind comments. It's difficult to put thoughts into so few words and write a complete story (at least it is for me...talk...talk...talk) LOL. Thank you!
    Have a great day!