Farewell my love to thee
Saying goodbye.38 total reviews
Comment from QC Poet
My Condolences on your wife's passing and praying that your whenfamily will find comfort and peace. I also have been married for 43 years and have bought our plots as it came to mind when my brother passed away so we can rest next to each other Blessings to you and yours
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My Condolences on your wife's passing and praying that your whenfamily will find comfort and peace. I also have been married for 43 years and have bought our plots as it came to mind when my brother passed away so we can rest next to each other Blessings to you and yours
Comment Written 10-Jun-2024
Comment from GoWiSt
Good reading flow and rhymes.
"My darling love has gone away." Oh, so sad.
"I know she waits in Heaven for me," Oh, so hopefully sweet.
Indeed, you'll meet again soon--but don't quite be too eager for a while yet. :-)
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Good reading flow and rhymes.
"My darling love has gone away." Oh, so sad.
"I know she waits in Heaven for me," Oh, so hopefully sweet.
Indeed, you'll meet again soon--but don't quite be too eager for a while yet. :-)
Comment Written 10-Jun-2024
Comment from jessizero
I loved this poem. It was beautiful. I enjoyed your rhymes and rhyme scheme, and I liked the repetition. Your poem was moving. Thank you for sharing, and best wishes to you.
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I loved this poem. It was beautiful. I enjoyed your rhymes and rhyme scheme, and I liked the repetition. Your poem was moving. Thank you for sharing, and best wishes to you.
Comment Written 10-Jun-2024
Comment from jmdg1954
Willie,
What can I say? These words you wrote for us to read are beautiful. I can feel the love simply jump from the page.
Simple and clean and written from your soul!
Wishing you the best, my friend!
John
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Willie,
What can I say? These words you wrote for us to read are beautiful. I can feel the love simply jump from the page.
Simple and clean and written from your soul!
Wishing you the best, my friend!
John
Comment Written 10-Jun-2024
Comment from Rachelle Allen
Ohhh dear. This is so poignant and definitely hits me where my worst life fear resides. How long were you together, Willie? At least you've made some beautiful lemonade here from the lemons, and I am sure I'm not the only one you've touched here today with your beautiful poem. Sending you so much love. xoxox Good luck in the Free Verse contest.
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Ohhh dear. This is so poignant and definitely hits me where my worst life fear resides. How long were you together, Willie? At least you've made some beautiful lemonade here from the lemons, and I am sure I'm not the only one you've touched here today with your beautiful poem. Sending you so much love. xoxox Good luck in the Free Verse contest.
Comment Written 10-Jun-2024
Comment from patcelaw
This is beautifully written and I enjoyed very much listening to it. Having lost my husband almost 29 years ago. I know the feeling that you have in your heart about having lost your wife. I wish you the very best for the remaining days of your life until you can join her in heaven. Have a good day sir and may God bless you. Patricia.
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This is beautifully written and I enjoyed very much listening to it. Having lost my husband almost 29 years ago. I know the feeling that you have in your heart about having lost your wife. I wish you the very best for the remaining days of your life until you can join her in heaven. Have a good day sir and may God bless you. Patricia.
Comment Written 10-Jun-2024
Comment from Ulla
It's a wonderful poem, son lyrics about the loss of the love of his life. But it is never a goodbye, just farewell. One day they will see each other again and rest together in eternity. Good luck in the contest . Ulla:)))
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It's a wonderful poem, son lyrics about the loss of the love of his life. But it is never a goodbye, just farewell. One day they will see each other again and rest together in eternity. Good luck in the contest . Ulla:)))
Comment Written 10-Jun-2024
Comment from Sally Law
This is just beautiful, my friend. My, what a grand love you share with your wife. I believe that love is as eternal as the heavens, so it continues past death. Just my thoughts. Sending you my best today as always.
Sally Xo
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This is just beautiful, my friend. My, what a grand love you share with your wife. I believe that love is as eternal as the heavens, so it continues past death. Just my thoughts. Sending you my best today as always.
Sally Xo
Comment Written 10-Jun-2024
Comment from Begin Again
Beautiful and so full of emotion. I don't know if you have actually experienced this, but I do know you feel the deep loss one feels when we are separated from our loved ones. I lost my husband and everyday it's a struggle until we meet again. Well done!
Smiles, Carol
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Beautiful and so full of emotion. I don't know if you have actually experienced this, but I do know you feel the deep loss one feels when we are separated from our loved ones. I lost my husband and everyday it's a struggle until we meet again. Well done!
Smiles, Carol
Comment Written 10-Jun-2024
Comment from Nicole Schmidt
This is very sad and I can definitely feel the emotions behind this. The graphic you chose to add to this is perfect as well. I wish you all the best going forward.
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This is very sad and I can definitely feel the emotions behind this. The graphic you chose to add to this is perfect as well. I wish you all the best going forward.
Comment Written 10-Jun-2024
