DUEL with the DEVIL
Viewing comments for Chapter 3 "DUEL with the DEVIL - Chapter 3"The problem of creating a non-addictive painkiller
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Comment from Debbie D'Arcy
Lovely! You're going to make us wait for the relapse because everything is certainly on the up at the moment! I like Brian. He's straight and honest and is becoming a very rounded character. As ever, faultlessly written with excellent dialogue and good pace and length. Everything going smoothly at the moment. Thanks for sharing, Jim. Take care Debbie
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reply by the author on 13-Jun-2024
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Lovely! You're going to make us wait for the relapse because everything is certainly on the up at the moment! I like Brian. He's straight and honest and is becoming a very rounded character. As ever, faultlessly written with excellent dialogue and good pace and length. Everything going smoothly at the moment. Thanks for sharing, Jim. Take care Debbie
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Comment Written 12-Jun-2024
reply by the author on 13-Jun-2024
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Thanks, Debbie. Yeah, it may be difficult at this point to imagine how he gets from here to that scene in the prologue, but we'll see the genesis of it soon. You'll also find that Brian, at least for a while, will begin floundering. His won't be a straight path through life.
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Excellent!!