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Two very real women in not so real situation.

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Comment from BethShelby
Exceptional
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This is such a cool thing the two of you are doing. Amish people are interesting. I think in might be against one of their commandment to kill you, but they might just keep you suspende in the 1800's until someone happens to be going toward town. I'm enjoying you little adventure.,

 Comment Written 29-Jun-2024


reply by the author on 29-Jun-2024
    Being suspended in the eighteen hundreds might be worse than death for two women who are used to conveniences of the present day. Lol. Thank you so much for the entertaining review and the bonus six. Gretchen
Comment from barbara.wilkey
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Thank you for sharing this installment. I enjoyed reading. My mom lives in the middle of Amish country. When they bought the farm, it wasn't, but it is now. Just so you know, they do have emergency phone in special areas in case they're needed. Right now, would be a good time to use one.
 
I hang back, ready to hope into the broken down car if need be. (hop & broken-down)

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 Comment Written 29-Jun-2024


reply by the author on 29-Jun-2024
    Thank you. That might be a funny ending, seeing a phone half a mile down the road from the broken SUV. right after they are on their way to the convention. Thank you for the edit as well. Gretchen