A Treasured Space
Messy rooms have a purpose22 total reviews
Comment from Michael Ludwinder
Your poem is wonderful. I love how it captures a tender moment of parental reflection on the curiosity of childhood. The final line really stood out, "I'll cherish these moments forever." For me that shares the fleeting, precious moments of their child's growth and wonder. It's a heartfelt expression of love and gratitude for the everyday moments that make parenthood so meaningful.
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reply by the author on 03-Jul-2024
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Your poem is wonderful. I love how it captures a tender moment of parental reflection on the curiosity of childhood. The final line really stood out, "I'll cherish these moments forever." For me that shares the fleeting, precious moments of their child's growth and wonder. It's a heartfelt expression of love and gratitude for the everyday moments that make parenthood so meaningful.
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Comment Written 02-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 03-Jul-2024
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Thank you very much!
Comment from Neonewman
Yes, they grow up way too fast. Plants on the inside, bugs on the outside I'd say, lol. This is a great little piece accompanied by a cool piece of artwork.
God bless,
Steve
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reply by the author on 03-Jul-2024
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Yes, they grow up way too fast. Plants on the inside, bugs on the outside I'd say, lol. This is a great little piece accompanied by a cool piece of artwork.
God bless,
Steve
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Comment Written 02-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 03-Jul-2024
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Thank you, Steve!
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My pleasure.
