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Viewing comments for Chapter 7 "Nothing's What It Seems (Hargis)"Two very real women in not so real situation.
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Comment from Wayne Fowler
I don't know... Rachelle seemed awfully comfortable using Amish toilet paper. (smiley face here)
Well done.
I think this would be a fabulously fun project.
Best wishes.
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reply by the author on 14-Jul-2024
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I don't know... Rachelle seemed awfully comfortable using Amish toilet paper. (smiley face here)
Well done.
I think this would be a fabulously fun project.
Best wishes.
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Comment Written 14-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 14-Jul-2024
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It has been fun. Not sure how many more installments but that's kind of the beauty in the project. We just run with it. Thank you for this fun review. Gretchen
Comment from barbara.wilkey
Oh my goodness!!! Way too funny. Thank you for sharing this with us. I loved it.
Don't be shy," I call out over my shoulder." (omit the quotation mark after 'shoulder.')
"I hardly think there are any perverts within a hundred miles," she laughs. (miles," She laughs.)
"We use them as a means to clean ourselves after we ," Helene pauses mid-sentence, waiting for me to get up to speed. (we.)
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reply by the author on 14-Jul-2024
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Oh my goodness!!! Way too funny. Thank you for sharing this with us. I loved it.
Don't be shy," I call out over my shoulder." (omit the quotation mark after 'shoulder.')
"I hardly think there are any perverts within a hundred miles," she laughs. (miles," She laughs.)
"We use them as a means to clean ourselves after we ," Helene pauses mid-sentence, waiting for me to get up to speed. (we.)
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Comment Written 14-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 14-Jul-2024
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thank you so much for this awesome review. I'm glad you are finding this fun. That is the purpose of it for me. Just a pure fictional thing, no rhyme or reason. Thank you for the edits. Gretchen