Spirited Justice
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Comment from royowen
How wonderful, I knew you would solve the problem of Naomi. So, Angelo is sweet on her, and the dangerous Jose doesn't know she's been rescued, if he finds out, it will mean curtains for him and Naomi, but Eleanor is a great ally, she can do things no mortal can do, well done Carol, blessings Roy
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reply by the author on 22-Aug-2024
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How wonderful, I knew you would solve the problem of Naomi. So, Angelo is sweet on her, and the dangerous Jose doesn't know she's been rescued, if he finds out, it will mean curtains for him and Naomi, but Eleanor is a great ally, she can do things no mortal can do, well done Carol, blessings Roy
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Comment Written 22-Aug-2024
reply by the author on 22-Aug-2024
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Nice catch, Roy! I read that story over how many times and missed it. Fixed!
And yes, I had to send in the calvary to save her, but they aren't out of the "danger zone" yet. Hope Eleanor can help them out.
Smiles, Carol
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Well done