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Willing Hearts

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Solve a crime and fall in love at the same time?

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Comment from Jacob1395
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I loved the line when Noah said to Sami that he didn't want her to ever feel afraid of him. It is clear to see how much he loves her and how much Sami wants to love him. Another excellent, engaging chapter, Barbara. I really enjoyed reading it.

 Comment Written 25-Aug-2024


reply by the author on 25-Aug-2024
    Thank you for this kind and understanding review.
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
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I never had Chili Mac .... is it a Texas thing? LoL it sounds good.

Well, Sami and Noah's relationship is moving along nicely. Noah's walls are tumbling down.

I think Noah is going to propose soon. They make a sweet couple.

Are your romance heroines based on yours? And the men your husband? The characters seem real.

Well done

 Comment Written 25-Aug-2024


reply by the author on 25-Aug-2024
    My characters are normally a few people who I know and slip them into one character. Chili Mac is a mixture of macaroni and cheese and chili. My mom made it with left over chili when growing up in the Midwest, so I doubt it's Texan. Thank you for the kind review.
reply by Gypsy Blue Rose on 25-Aug-2024
    I googled the chili mac and it sounds yummy ... a comfort food for sure.
Comment from jim vecchio
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More light flirting and casual talk between meals. The calm before the storm? Your characters continue to be fleshing out nicely. Soon, I hope they'll be a day when Noah and Sami can finally be together without interruption or duty conflicting.

 Comment Written 25-Aug-2024


reply by the author on 25-Aug-2024
    Thank you for the kind review.
reply by jim vecchio on 25-Aug-2024
    You deserve it.
Comment from BethShelby
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It is good that Sami understands Noah and is okay with the fact that he doesn't express his feeling with words. People are all different and before you start expecting things from you prospective mate you need to undertand how they express themselves. I know I had to learn with my own husband there were certain things I couldn't expect him to do and I had to let him be himself. He had do the same with me.

 Comment Written 25-Aug-2024


reply by the author on 25-Aug-2024
    Thank you for the understanding.
Comment from Ulla
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Hi Barbara,Sami and Noah, are slowly ever so slowly getting a bit closer to getting it right. But I must say they're taking their merry time. A bit of action is much needed here. Ulla xcx

 Comment Written 25-Aug-2024


reply by the author on 25-Aug-2024
    Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from nomi338
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Man, I love the way this story is evolving. Things are taking place as just as I think they should. Of course it is not up to me, but at the same time, I am not surprised or shocked by events as they take place. Everything seems to happening as just the right and proper pace. Good job.

 Comment Written 25-Aug-2024


reply by the author on 25-Aug-2024
    Thank you for the kind review and undestanding.
Comment from lancellot
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A well written chapter, and it really showcases your particular style, in presenting your characters, as strong, intelligent, independent, kind and so on individuals. Everything looks good. I'm sure your fans will be pleased.

 Comment Written 25-Aug-2024


reply by the author on 25-Aug-2024
    Thank you for sharing this kind review with us. I have to share this with you because you've always been critical of my style of writing. Before church today a lady came up to me and told me she was really angry with me because she got so engrossed with one of my novels that she couldn't put it down and got to bed. She had to keep reading. Those are the people I'm writing for.
reply by lancellot on 25-Aug-2024
    That's so Kool :)
Comment from Karen Cherry Threadgill
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I predict that when this quarantine is over they get married rather quickly. They have seen each other up close and personal.
They know a lot about each other. Have a good week. Karen

 Comment Written 25-Aug-2024


reply by the author on 25-Aug-2024
    Thank you for the kind review.
reply by Karen Cherry Threadgill on 25-Aug-2024
    U R Welcome. On to reviewing.
    Karen
Comment from Begin Again
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I guess Sami and Noah are figuring things out an inch at a time. sometimes I want to yell, "Come on, you two." but then I say "Calm down. He's got work to do!" Crazy when you get so wrapped up in the characters. LOL
Smiles, Carol

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 Comment Written 25-Aug-2024


reply by the author on 25-Aug-2024
    I do understand. Thank you for the kind review.