In Memory of Nomi's Wife, Yvonne
Viewing comments for Chapter 16 "Rise"Posts to let Nomi know we are here for him
35 total reviews
Comment from jake cosmos aller
great use of the traditional sonnet format to write this heart-felt heart-warming elegy poem for Nomi in his hour of need as he deals with the lost of his wife of 51 years.
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great use of the traditional sonnet format to write this heart-felt heart-warming elegy poem for Nomi in his hour of need as he deals with the lost of his wife of 51 years.
Comment Written 13-Sep-2024
Comment from Neonewman
This piece breaks my heart--for this man! It's gut-wrenching and tear-provoking. I'm sorry for your loss, Nomi. Thank you, Jessica, for sharing this beautifully crafted piece.
God bless,
Steve
reply by the author on 20-Sep-2024
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This piece breaks my heart--for this man! It's gut-wrenching and tear-provoking. I'm sorry for your loss, Nomi. Thank you, Jessica, for sharing this beautifully crafted piece.
God bless,
Steve
Comment Written 13-Sep-2024
reply by the author on 20-Sep-2024
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Thank you so much, Steve! Xo
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My pleasure.
Comment from Begin Again
Your poem, as so many others, has offered strength, comfort and love to Nomi in his time of grief and I know that he feels the caring as everyone wraps their arms around him. You did an excellent job and I know it will be appreciated.
smiles, Carol
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Your poem, as so many others, has offered strength, comfort and love to Nomi in his time of grief and I know that he feels the caring as everyone wraps their arms around him. You did an excellent job and I know it will be appreciated.
smiles, Carol
Comment Written 13-Sep-2024
Comment from barbara.wilkey
Nomi is a special person to me. We've been friends for a few years now. I know he feels the prayers that Fanstory member have lifted up for him and his family. God's comfort is there. I also know he'll cherish this poem.
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Nomi is a special person to me. We've been friends for a few years now. I know he feels the prayers that Fanstory member have lifted up for him and his family. God's comfort is there. I also know he'll cherish this poem.
Comment Written 13-Sep-2024
Comment from Shanbreen
Jessica, I like your sonnet for Naomi on the loss of his beloved wife. Losing someone close brings forth such sorrow. I am so glad you wrote this poem for him. I am sure he will find solace from it.
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Jessica, I like your sonnet for Naomi on the loss of his beloved wife. Losing someone close brings forth such sorrow. I am so glad you wrote this poem for him. I am sure he will find solace from it.
Comment Written 13-Sep-2024
Comment from Marilyn Hamilton
A most beautiful Sonnet and one can tell it was written in love. We are all praying that Nomi is finding comfort in the writing we are sharing and the love behind the words. Thanks for sharing.
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A most beautiful Sonnet and one can tell it was written in love. We are all praying that Nomi is finding comfort in the writing we are sharing and the love behind the words. Thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 13-Sep-2024
Comment from Debbie D'Arcy
A beautiful sonnet from the heart wishing Nomi comfort and peace! I hope, with his family around him and the love and support from all his friends here, he will gather the strength and belief to face the difficult path ahead. Thanks for sharing, Jess. Debbie xo
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A beautiful sonnet from the heart wishing Nomi comfort and peace! I hope, with his family around him and the love and support from all his friends here, he will gather the strength and belief to face the difficult path ahead. Thanks for sharing, Jess. Debbie xo
Comment Written 13-Sep-2024
Comment from Bill Schott
This sonnet, Rise, has the proper formatting and sends the words that will be accepted and used as he goes on without Yvonne. This separation is rough as we can all assume.
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This sonnet, Rise, has the proper formatting and sends the words that will be accepted and used as he goes on without Yvonne. This separation is rough as we can all assume.
Comment Written 13-Sep-2024
Comment from Sugarray77
Hi Jessica... I hope you are having a really fun Friday! This is a lovely and very sympathetic verse you have crafted for Nolan. He will deeply enjoy your wonderful sentiments and well wishes. Thank you for reaching out to him.
Melissa
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Hi Jessica... I hope you are having a really fun Friday! This is a lovely and very sympathetic verse you have crafted for Nolan. He will deeply enjoy your wonderful sentiments and well wishes. Thank you for reaching out to him.
Melissa
Comment Written 13-Sep-2024
Comment from davisr (Rhonda)
A beautiful and comforting poem, Jessica. It is a tender and comforting message delivered with the skill of a poet. I'm sure it will be a great solace for him to fall back on and read when, like the man in the pictures, he just sits and wonders how he's going to make it alone.
Take care,
Rhonda
reply by the author on 20-Sep-2024
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A beautiful and comforting poem, Jessica. It is a tender and comforting message delivered with the skill of a poet. I'm sure it will be a great solace for him to fall back on and read when, like the man in the pictures, he just sits and wonders how he's going to make it alone.
Take care,
Rhonda
Comment Written 13-Sep-2024
reply by the author on 20-Sep-2024
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Rhonda, I appreciate that very much. Thank you! Xo