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Poem 5/7/527 total reviews
Comment from Sanku
This is true .people are selfish and deceitful and they may try to kill you with a smile .They can betray you with aloving kiss or hugs
well said all the best for the contest...
reply by the author on 09-Oct-2024
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This is true .people are selfish and deceitful and they may try to kill you with a smile .They can betray you with aloving kiss or hugs
well said all the best for the contest...
Comment Written 25-Sep-2024
reply by the author on 09-Oct-2024
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Great review zanya
Comment from Father Flaps
Hi Zanya,
Not so many breakups come face-to-face. A gift or a "Dear John" letter is always easier. Not sure if this idea was your intention, but that's the way I took it. It's a terrific entry for the subject of betrayal, and I wish you lots of luck in the contest!
Hugs,
Kimbob
reply by the author on 09-Oct-2024
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Hi Zanya,
Not so many breakups come face-to-face. A gift or a "Dear John" letter is always easier. Not sure if this idea was your intention, but that's the way I took it. It's a terrific entry for the subject of betrayal, and I wish you lots of luck in the contest!
Hugs,
Kimbob
Comment Written 25-Sep-2024
reply by the author on 09-Oct-2024
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Well said - thanks for sharing zanya
Comment from Begin Again
Good one, Zanya!
You can never judge the book by its cover because we can't see the real story until we get inside..... and then we must be careful not to believe everything we read. Or kiss!
Smiles, Carol
reply by the author on 18-Oct-2024
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Good one, Zanya!
You can never judge the book by its cover because we can't see the real story until we get inside..... and then we must be careful not to believe everything we read. Or kiss!
Smiles, Carol
Comment Written 25-Sep-2024
reply by the author on 18-Oct-2024
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Well outlined-thanks for sharing zanya
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
This is such a clever post as betrayal can be secretive and also blatant and you covered both here with this great poem for the contest, I wish you luck Zanya, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 18-Oct-2024
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This is such a clever post as betrayal can be secretive and also blatant and you covered both here with this great poem for the contest, I wish you luck Zanya, love Dolly x
Comment Written 25-Sep-2024
reply by the author on 18-Oct-2024
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Great review zanya
Comment from Wendy G
Very well presented - and, unfortunately also very astute and true in what you said. And acts of betrayal, especially by supposed friends, are hurtful and devastating. Well said. Best wishes for the contest.
Wendy
reply by the author on 18-Oct-2024
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Very well presented - and, unfortunately also very astute and true in what you said. And acts of betrayal, especially by supposed friends, are hurtful and devastating. Well said. Best wishes for the contest.
Wendy
Comment Written 25-Sep-2024
reply by the author on 18-Oct-2024
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Great review zanya
Comment from jessizero
This 5-7-5 worked very well for the "betrayal" poetry contest, I think. Sometimes the most horrible things come in pretty packages. You also got the syllable counts right. Thank you for sharing, and best wishes to you.
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reply by the author on 18-Oct-2024
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This 5-7-5 worked very well for the "betrayal" poetry contest, I think. Sometimes the most horrible things come in pretty packages. You also got the syllable counts right. Thank you for sharing, and best wishes to you.
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Comment Written 24-Sep-2024
reply by the author on 18-Oct-2024
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Great review zanya
Comment from patcelaw
This is a very interesting thought as you have put it into this 575 haiku type poem and I very much enjoyed listening to it. May you have a wonderful day and blessed weekend and may God bless you. Patricia.
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reply by the author on 18-Oct-2024
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This is a very interesting thought as you have put it into this 575 haiku type poem and I very much enjoyed listening to it. May you have a wonderful day and blessed weekend and may God bless you. Patricia.
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Comment Written 24-Sep-2024
reply by the author on 18-Oct-2024
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Thanks for reviewing zanya