Hannah
An Acrostic, Club Entry32 total reviews
Comment from Kahlani
What a fantastic poem, Jessica. It's dark and haunting and kept me on the edge of my seat. It's very clever how you wrote an acrostic poem that rhymes. Good luck in the contest.
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What a fantastic poem, Jessica. It's dark and haunting and kept me on the edge of my seat. It's very clever how you wrote an acrostic poem that rhymes. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 05-Oct-2024
Comment from Debbie D'Arcy
A well-crafted Halloween acrostic with a difference. Initially your verse with its title and depiction of young Hannah cleverly suggests that she is the one hiding from the ghosts, only to discover in your second stanza that she is, in fact, the one haunting the undead souls.This in turn enhances the creepy atmosphere still more by drawing the reader deeper into the unknown. Well done, Jess, and good luck! Debbie
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A well-crafted Halloween acrostic with a difference. Initially your verse with its title and depiction of young Hannah cleverly suggests that she is the one hiding from the ghosts, only to discover in your second stanza that she is, in fact, the one haunting the undead souls.This in turn enhances the creepy atmosphere still more by drawing the reader deeper into the unknown. Well done, Jess, and good luck! Debbie
Comment Written 05-Oct-2024
Comment from zanya
Ouch - this poem for the Halloween poetry contest really does have the desired effect and creates a spooky atmosphere -the opening line is very powerful- wish I had 6 remaining
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Ouch - this poem for the Halloween poetry contest really does have the desired effect and creates a spooky atmosphere -the opening line is very powerful- wish I had 6 remaining
Comment Written 05-Oct-2024
Comment from patcelaw
This is a very well written, cross it for the Halloween contest and I wish you the very best with the contest. May you have a wonderful weekend and may God bless you richly through the coming week.
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This is a very well written, cross it for the Halloween contest and I wish you the very best with the contest. May you have a wonderful weekend and may God bless you richly through the coming week.
Comment Written 05-Oct-2024
Comment from judiverse
Great job with the acrostic. You brought in rhyme as an extra plus. Excellent topic for your workshop. You handle each line well, expanding with details to tell a story. You include the trappings of the creaky steps and the fog, which adds to the spine tingles. Can't blame Hannah for wanting to return to her own room. Excellent acrostic. judi
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Great job with the acrostic. You brought in rhyme as an extra plus. Excellent topic for your workshop. You handle each line well, expanding with details to tell a story. You include the trappings of the creaky steps and the fog, which adds to the spine tingles. Can't blame Hannah for wanting to return to her own room. Excellent acrostic. judi
Comment Written 05-Oct-2024
Comment from royowen
Ah you've created a great theme here, the illusion of Hannah being the victim when really she's the catalyst behind, this is beautifully written with great strategic rhyme and a great thematic lacing, well done, blessings Roy
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Ah you've created a great theme here, the illusion of Hannah being the victim when really she's the catalyst behind, this is beautifully written with great strategic rhyme and a great thematic lacing, well done, blessings Roy
Comment Written 05-Oct-2024
Comment from Debi Pick Marquette
Hahahaha. Yours sounds much better than Happy the happy clown that turned killer. I thought this was really good and spooky. I loved the font that has a shriek to it and your picture is perfect. I loved it. Hannah and Happy would make quite a pair haunting together, maybe cheek to cheek?? Haaaaaahaaaahaaaahaaaa!
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Hahahaha. Yours sounds much better than Happy the happy clown that turned killer. I thought this was really good and spooky. I loved the font that has a shriek to it and your picture is perfect. I loved it. Hannah and Happy would make quite a pair haunting together, maybe cheek to cheek?? Haaaaaahaaaahaaaahaaaa!
Comment Written 05-Oct-2024
Comment from Shirley Ann Bunyan
This is a brilliant acrostic poem, Jessica.
Intelligently and smoothly written, no forced rhymes and a good story, too.
All not easy keeping the acrostic element. Excellent writing x
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This is a brilliant acrostic poem, Jessica.
Intelligently and smoothly written, no forced rhymes and a good story, too.
All not easy keeping the acrostic element. Excellent writing x
Comment Written 05-Oct-2024
Comment from gramalot8
Thank you for sharing your Acrostic Halloween poem with us. It is one of my favorite styles to create.
You definitely described Hannah and her frightening mannerisms and haunted house. Thanks for sharing this with us.
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Thank you for sharing your Acrostic Halloween poem with us. It is one of my favorite styles to create.
You definitely described Hannah and her frightening mannerisms and haunted house. Thanks for sharing this with us.
Comment Written 05-Oct-2024
Comment from barbara.wilkey
Thank you for sharing this Halloween Poetry contest entry with us. I enjoy acrostic poem, and this one certainly didn't disappoint. You described the haunted house perfectly. I want to wish you luck with the contest.
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Thank you for sharing this Halloween Poetry contest entry with us. I enjoy acrostic poem, and this one certainly didn't disappoint. You described the haunted house perfectly. I want to wish you luck with the contest.
This rating does not count towards story rating or author rank.
The highest and the lowest rating are not included in calculations.
Comment Written 05-Oct-2024