Thoughts on Love
A few quick thoughts concerning love.26 total reviews
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
Babies know no other life when they are born but to be with Mother and rely on her for everything. The more they learn, the more independent they become. I enjoyed your warm and loving post Beth, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 08-Oct-2024
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Babies know no other life when they are born but to be with Mother and rely on her for everything. The more they learn, the more independent they become. I enjoyed your warm and loving post Beth, love Dolly x
Comment Written 08-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 08-Oct-2024
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Thank you, Dolly, I saw the contest was about to expire and I wrote i quickly before going to bed. I so glad you think it sound okay.
Beth
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Thank you, Dolly, I saw the contest was about to expire and I wrote i quickly before going to bed. I so glad you think it sound okay.
Beth
Comment from Wendy G
That is a truly lovely one, with its very smooth rhyme and pleasing metre - as well as the words which speak of true love and its source and origins. Best wishes for the contest.
Wendy
reply by the author on 28-Oct-2024
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That is a truly lovely one, with its very smooth rhyme and pleasing metre - as well as the words which speak of true love and its source and origins. Best wishes for the contest.
Wendy
Comment Written 08-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 28-Oct-2024
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Thank you again, Wendy. I really pleased you liked my poem.
Beth
Comment from Ang Tang
Beautiful and thought-provoking. It has an element of sadness to it, at least it has that effect on me. Because every baby turns into an adult, and suffering and heartbreak are unavoidable parts of being human. I especially enjoyed the part about how that beautiful, magical quality about babies is " A gift God gave to all mankind, within His character enshrined."
Thanks and God bless.
reply by the author on 08-Oct-2024
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Beautiful and thought-provoking. It has an element of sadness to it, at least it has that effect on me. Because every baby turns into an adult, and suffering and heartbreak are unavoidable parts of being human. I especially enjoyed the part about how that beautiful, magical quality about babies is " A gift God gave to all mankind, within His character enshrined."
Thanks and God bless.
Comment Written 07-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 08-Oct-2024
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Thank you, Ang. I appreciate the review and comments. Yes, all of will experience some heartache in our lives. Hopefully the love that comes our way will a positive difference.
Beth
Comment from Charles D Ezell
For sure, Beth. Love covers a ton of mistakes and opens the door to life. Very good. Thanks for sharing. I wish you the best in the contest. Blessings to you.
reply by the author on 08-Oct-2024
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For sure, Beth. Love covers a ton of mistakes and opens the door to life. Very good. Thanks for sharing. I wish you the best in the contest. Blessings to you.
Comment Written 07-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 08-Oct-2024
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Thank you for the great review. I appreciate you giving me so many of your stars. I wrote this poem when I saw the contest was about to end and I started not to post it but it seems to be doing OK.
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Thank you for the great review. I appreciate you giving me so many of your stars. I wrote this poem when I saw the contest was about to end and I started not to post it but it seems to be doing OK.
Comment from lyenochka
Great description of love and I like your examples and also that you gave the source of love in :
A gift God gave to all mankind,
within His character enshrined.
Suggestions:
it's magic works right from the start. ( its )
It not an object one can touch, (It's)
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reply by the author on 08-Oct-2024
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Great description of love and I like your examples and also that you gave the source of love in :
A gift God gave to all mankind,
within His character enshrined.
Suggestions:
it's magic works right from the start. ( its )
It not an object one can touch, (It's)
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Comment Written 07-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 08-Oct-2024
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Thank you, Helen, I'm glad you noticed those spots that needed corrections.
Beth
Comment from Wayne Fowler
As good a definition as any - 'a feeling meant to share,
a treasure we must treat with care.'
Very nice poem. It flows very naturally.
Good luck in the contest.
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reply by the author on 08-Oct-2024
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As good a definition as any - 'a feeling meant to share,
a treasure we must treat with care.'
Very nice poem. It flows very naturally.
Good luck in the contest.
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The highest and the lowest rating are not included in calculations.
Comment Written 07-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 08-Oct-2024
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Thank you, Wayne. I appreciate you reviewing and commenting on it.
Beth
