Another Fine Mess
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Comment from Gayla putnam
It's delightfully macabre. The picture was great, too. I loved some of the lines, such as the cowboy trick. The tempo flows perfectly. Honestly, I'm still laughing, but maybe I remember the joys of menopause. gayla
reply by the author on 16-Oct-2024
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It's delightfully macabre. The picture was great, too. I loved some of the lines, such as the cowboy trick. The tempo flows perfectly. Honestly, I'm still laughing, but maybe I remember the joys of menopause. gayla
Comment Written 16-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 16-Oct-2024
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I saw that photo and the poem poured out pretty easy. Thanks for the read and nice comments.
Comment from Marilyn Hamilton
An excellent entry for the What a Mess writing prompt. They really don't make Swiffer pads like they used to when they won't even clean up after a murder. The world can be such a disappointment. Nicely done.
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reply by the author on 16-Oct-2024
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An excellent entry for the What a Mess writing prompt. They really don't make Swiffer pads like they used to when they won't even clean up after a murder. The world can be such a disappointment. Nicely done.
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Comment Written 16-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 16-Oct-2024
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Thanks so much. My favored way of mopping is to spray the floor as I go, with a pinalen and water solution, While I go across the floor with an old towel. Thanks for the read.
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Thanks so much. My favored way of mopping is to spray the floor as I go, with a pinalen and water solution, While I go across the floor with an old towel. Thanks for the read.