Comment from Robert Zimmerman

Excellent

Your poem reads like it is written by a sinner saved by grace. It reads as a poem/prayer seeking forgiveness. And of course, if we are faithful in confessing our sins, the Lord is faithful in forgiving them. Good luck in the contest.
Robert.

 Comment Written 19-Oct-2024

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reply by the author on 20-Oct-2024

Thank you so very much for the kind and generous review. Don

reply by Robert Zimmerman on 20-Oct-2024

You're welcome.

Comment from Carol Clark2

Excellent

This is a lovely prayer poem for the Faith poetry contest. I like the humility of your words, and the attitude with which you approach God for forgiveness. Best wishes in the contest. Carol

 Comment Written 19-Oct-2024

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reply by the author on 19-Oct-2024

Thank you Carol, for the oh so kind review.

reply by Carol Clark2 on 19-Oct-2024

You're very welcome. I enjoyed your poem. Blessings. Carol

Comment from Marilyn Hamilton

Excellent

A beautiful poem from someone who sounds like they've been lost and are returning to God and His promises. An excellent entry for the My Faith poetry contest.

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 Comment Written 19-Oct-2024

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reply by the author on 19-Oct-2024

Thank you so much Marilyn, a wonderful review.

Comment from Thesis

Excellent

This plea for forgiveness and mercy for previous misdeeds shows a remorseful soul who had lost its way. Atonement is cleansing, which this person desperately seeks.

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 Comment Written 19-Oct-2024

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reply by the author on 19-Oct-2024

Thank you very much.