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Viewing comments for Chapter 38 "Dolly's Version"Two very real women in not so real situation.
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Comment from Jacob1395
This was really well written, Dolly and I could feel the level of excitement at the prospect of meeting everyone coming through. I think this is a brilliant idea Rachelle and Gretchen have come up with. A really well written piece. I enjoyed reading it.
reply by the author on 27-Oct-2024
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This was really well written, Dolly and I could feel the level of excitement at the prospect of meeting everyone coming through. I think this is a brilliant idea Rachelle and Gretchen have come up with. A really well written piece. I enjoyed reading it.
Comment Written 27-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 27-Oct-2024
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Thank you Jacob for your review, I really appreciate your thoughts here as I don't post much on the writers side like you do, love Dolly x x x
Comment from jim vecchio
I don't know. I remember Groucho's remark, 'I wouldn't want to be member of any club that has me as a member."
however, FanStory might be an exception. So many witty, wonderful women and so many men that dazzle me with their writing skills. That might be a great evening.
reply by the author on 27-Oct-2024
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I don't know. I remember Groucho's remark, 'I wouldn't want to be member of any club that has me as a member."
however, FanStory might be an exception. So many witty, wonderful women and so many men that dazzle me with their writing skills. That might be a great evening.
Comment Written 27-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 27-Oct-2024
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Thank you Jim for your review, I appreciate your kind thoughts, love Dolly x
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Have a Blessed Day!
Comment from Rachelle Allen
Gretchen described this chapter as "a warm hug," and I could not agree more. Thank you for taking the time to introduce us to even more FanStorians and acquaint us with their personalities. It was a quite delightful meet-and-greet!! xoxox
reply by the author on 27-Oct-2024
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Gretchen described this chapter as "a warm hug," and I could not agree more. Thank you for taking the time to introduce us to even more FanStorians and acquaint us with their personalities. It was a quite delightful meet-and-greet!! xoxox
Comment Written 27-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 27-Oct-2024
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Thank you Rachelle for your thoughtful review, glad you enjoyed this one to contribute to your lovely story, love Dolly x
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Sorry Rachelle, I should have entitled it Dolly's Version! I made the change.
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Awww! Now I can't chastise you for not following directions! xoxox
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Ha ha ha x x x
Comment from royowen
I must admit, it would be wonderful thing to meet all the people we can't possibly meet, but it would be wonderful to put a face to everyone we read about, of or with, but it depends, beautifully written Dolly, blessings Roy
reply by the author on 27-Oct-2024
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I must admit, it would be wonderful thing to meet all the people we can't possibly meet, but it would be wonderful to put a face to everyone we read about, of or with, but it depends, beautifully written Dolly, blessings Roy
Comment Written 27-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 27-Oct-2024
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Thank you Roy for your review, love Dolly x
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Comment from barbara.wilkey
Thank you for sharing this addition to their book with us. I had so much fun reading.
"Hi Paul, please to meet you" I said with a smile. (you,")
"Likewise". He replied. (Likewise,")
I would have made
more of an effort". (effort.")
did you drive all the way here?". I (you can omit the period)
I will introduce you to her". (her." & I'm not going to edit anymore dialogue. Just keep an eye on your dialogue.)
reply by the author on 27-Oct-2024
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Thank you for sharing this addition to their book with us. I had so much fun reading.
"Hi Paul, please to meet you" I said with a smile. (you,")
"Likewise". He replied. (Likewise,")
I would have made
more of an effort". (effort.")
did you drive all the way here?". I (you can omit the period)
I will introduce you to her". (her." & I'm not going to edit anymore dialogue. Just keep an eye on your dialogue.)
Comment Written 27-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 27-Oct-2024
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Thank you Barbara for your helpful suggestions, I will make the changes, love Dolly x
Comment from Verna Cole Mitchell
What a fun story this is. You made it very real by introducing the people by their pictures and their writing. I had a very real dream one night about FanStorians gathering at a mansion belonging to one prominent member. I recognized folks in my dream, too.
reply by the author on 27-Oct-2024
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What a fun story this is. You made it very real by introducing the people by their pictures and their writing. I had a very real dream one night about FanStorians gathering at a mansion belonging to one prominent member. I recognized folks in my dream, too.
Comment Written 27-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 27-Oct-2024
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You made me smile here Verna as you had a dream about all the members meeting. Wouldn't it be lovely if we could all meet, thank you for your kind review, love Dolly x
Comment from Marilyn Hamilton
This is a cute story. Wouldn't it be fun if we could actually set something like that up sometime? Fun idea to add to Rachelles and Gretchen's story. Thanks for sharing.
reply by the author on 27-Oct-2024
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This is a cute story. Wouldn't it be fun if we could actually set something like that up sometime? Fun idea to add to Rachelles and Gretchen's story. Thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 27-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 27-Oct-2024
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Thank you Marilyn for your review, glad you enjoyed this addition to the multi book for Rachelle and Gretchen, love Dolly x
Comment from GWHARGIS
Awe. This was like a big warm hug, Dolly. I love the mention of each member. You possess the descriptive powers of clothing the same way Rachelle does. Somehow, I feel under dressed. Lol. Great post. Gretchen
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reply by the author on 27-Oct-2024
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Awe. This was like a big warm hug, Dolly. I love the mention of each member. You possess the descriptive powers of clothing the same way Rachelle does. Somehow, I feel under dressed. Lol. Great post. Gretchen
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Comment Written 27-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 27-Oct-2024
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Thank you Gretchen for your review, glad you enjoyed these descriptions, you and Rachelle have created such an amazing story and I am honoured to be a small part of it, love Dolly x
Comment from gansach
What a fun and interesting story this is. I will definitely have to go back and check out more of them in this multi-author book. It sounds fascinating. I loved seeing all these familiar names through your eyes, great descriptions! Very enjoyable!
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reply by the author on 27-Oct-2024
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What a fun and interesting story this is. I will definitely have to go back and check out more of them in this multi-author book. It sounds fascinating. I loved seeing all these familiar names through your eyes, great descriptions! Very enjoyable!
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Comment Written 27-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 27-Oct-2024
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Glad you enjoyed this one, it has been fun reading Rachelle and Gretchen's amazing stories and now we have the opportunity to add our experience of the convention and I am just hoping I haven't offended anyone, ha ha ha, love Dolly x