Wettest
A Love Story.27 total reviews
Comment from Marilyn Hamilton
An excellent entry for the Share a Story in a Poem contest. Very romantic poem. Easy flow and good rhyme to it. The artwork adds nicely to your presentation. Wishing you good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 10-Nov-2024
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An excellent entry for the Share a Story in a Poem contest. Very romantic poem. Easy flow and good rhyme to it. The artwork adds nicely to your presentation. Wishing you good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 09-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 10-Nov-2024
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Thank you so much.
Comment from gramalot8
I really love your cute choice of picture. It really goes well with your cute love story.
Nothing like a good snuggle and kisses to keep us warm... and even dry... and thanks to the umbrella protection as well.
Thanks for sharing this with us and good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 09-Nov-2024
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I really love your cute choice of picture. It really goes well with your cute love story.
Nothing like a good snuggle and kisses to keep us warm... and even dry... and thanks to the umbrella protection as well.
Thanks for sharing this with us and good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 09-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 09-Nov-2024
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Thank you so very much for your kind review.
Comment from Cecilia A Heiskary
DonandVicki,
Not sure which one or both of you wrote this, but this is an awesome poem. The picture is perfect and I like the way it's moving. The poem rhymes nicely and tells the story to a completion.
There is one small error:
With a handsome fella(h)-you need to drop the (h) otherwise it gives this word a totally different meaning.
Great job and good luck in your contest.
Cecilia
reply by the author on 09-Nov-2024
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DonandVicki,
Not sure which one or both of you wrote this, but this is an awesome poem. The picture is perfect and I like the way it's moving. The poem rhymes nicely and tells the story to a completion.
There is one small error:
With a handsome fella(h)-you need to drop the (h) otherwise it gives this word a totally different meaning.
Great job and good luck in your contest.
Cecilia
Comment Written 09-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 09-Nov-2024
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Both, thank you Cecilia for your kind review.
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You're welcome,
That's great that y'all write poems together. I try and read mine to my husband and he just doesn't get it . Even when it's a simple one. I tell him to read the words, he does and still doesn't get it-Duh
Cecilia
Comment from Bill Schott
This poem, Wettest, shows the readers the importance of having an umbrella available in the clinches which can enable the closeness required to follow through with a kiss. Nice.
reply by the author on 09-Nov-2024
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This poem, Wettest, shows the readers the importance of having an umbrella available in the clinches which can enable the closeness required to follow through with a kiss. Nice.
Comment Written 09-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 09-Nov-2024
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Thank you so much Bill.
Comment from Janet Foor
What a sweet love story. Short and sweet and it brought a smile as I read your romantically story that touches the hearts of other romantics.
Very nicely done and I'm happy that I have one 6 left.
Blessings
Janet
reply by the author on 09-Nov-2024
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What a sweet love story. Short and sweet and it brought a smile as I read your romantically story that touches the hearts of other romantics.
Very nicely done and I'm happy that I have one 6 left.
Blessings
Janet
Comment Written 09-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 09-Nov-2024
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Thank you so much Janet for the generous review.
Comment from nomi338
At a magical moment like that, the only to care about the rain, would most likely be the one least likely to be in love. I once had a magic moment like that more than 50 years ago. I have never forgotten it. She and I are still alive, but the chance of going forward, or even recreating that moment is gone forever I fear.
reply by the author on 09-Nov-2024
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At a magical moment like that, the only to care about the rain, would most likely be the one least likely to be in love. I once had a magic moment like that more than 50 years ago. I have never forgotten it. She and I are still alive, but the chance of going forward, or even recreating that moment is gone forever I fear.
Comment Written 09-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 09-Nov-2024
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Thank you Nomi, I appreciate your review.
Comment from Debbie D'Arcy
Haha! What an amazing visual! I feel wet just looking at it! Your rhyming verse has a light-hearted, fun tone to it which complemented the picture perfectly. I wasn't sure about the word 'Yum!!' though which didn't seem very romantic:)) But a very worthy contender , Don, and I wish you luck! Take care Debbie
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reply by the author on 09-Nov-2024
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Haha! What an amazing visual! I feel wet just looking at it! Your rhyming verse has a light-hearted, fun tone to it which complemented the picture perfectly. I wasn't sure about the word 'Yum!!' though which didn't seem very romantic:)) But a very worthy contender , Don, and I wish you luck! Take care Debbie
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Comment Written 09-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 09-Nov-2024
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Maybe "MMMMM!" Would be a bit better? Thank you Debbie for your review.
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Yes, I prefer that:))