Only grace through faith
A poem26 total reviews
Comment from lyenochka
Thank you for these marvelous words of reassurance of God's love for humanity. I appreciate that you focus on "speaking God's faith in truth"!
You probably already fixed:
I've been an advocate of hope to generate lights dreams.(light's)
I'll only speak God's faith in truth, I'll not spruke evil's word, (speak?)
reply by the author on 13-Nov-2024
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Thank you for these marvelous words of reassurance of God's love for humanity. I appreciate that you focus on "speaking God's faith in truth"!
You probably already fixed:
I've been an advocate of hope to generate lights dreams.(light's)
I'll only speak God's faith in truth, I'll not spruke evil's word, (speak?)
Comment Written 12-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 13-Nov-2024
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Thanks Helen for these fantastic comments and review, blessings Roy PS SPRUKE, is an Aussie slang word meaning trying to sell something furtively.
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Oh! Thanks for explaining! 😊💞
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Comment from kahpot
Even the weakest of us can have faith, your truth in this poem is wonderful, we apologize for not praying/seeking Gods advice, when He without knowing or seeing gives us all the help we require, a beautiful read, very well written****kahpot
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reply by the author on 13-Nov-2024
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Even the weakest of us can have faith, your truth in this poem is wonderful, we apologize for not praying/seeking Gods advice, when He without knowing or seeing gives us all the help we require, a beautiful read, very well written****kahpot
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Comment Written 12-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 13-Nov-2024
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Thanks for these super comments and a great review, blessings Roy
Comment from bob cullen
Are you sure you were not a Marist Brother. All those quotes are familiar. They were tough bastards, but they were dedicated, and they loved using the cane.
After reading the first four lines of this poem, I correctly guessed the author. Your writing is good and familiar. It always presents a valid message.
Another fine example of good poetry. And deserving of star number six.
reply by the author on 13-Nov-2024
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Are you sure you were not a Marist Brother. All those quotes are familiar. They were tough bastards, but they were dedicated, and they loved using the cane.
After reading the first four lines of this poem, I correctly guessed the author. Your writing is good and familiar. It always presents a valid message.
Another fine example of good poetry. And deserving of star number six.
Comment Written 11-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 13-Nov-2024
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Thanks Bob, for these super comments and a great review, blessings Roy
Comment from Michael Ludwinder
I really love the message in your poem. It's so full of hope and warmth! The way you highlight the importance of offering hope rather than criticism is really powerful. I also appreciate how you focus on faith with lines like "I'll only speak God's faith in truth" - perfect. Such a comforting and uplifting read! Keep sharing that light!
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reply by the author on 13-Nov-2024
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I really love the message in your poem. It's so full of hope and warmth! The way you highlight the importance of offering hope rather than criticism is really powerful. I also appreciate how you focus on faith with lines like "I'll only speak God's faith in truth" - perfect. Such a comforting and uplifting read! Keep sharing that light!
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Comment Written 11-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 13-Nov-2024
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Thanks Michael, for these super comments and a great review, blessings Roy
Comment from CrystieCookie999
This is an ably-written poem that appeals to a faith-seeking audience. I like the way you accent the use of rhyme and meter. There is a kind use of language here. Favorite line: The only time my lips will speak, will sing love's lullabies.
What an attractive blue-and-white presentation you created.
Suggestion in the last line:
To Him you're precious and you're loved inscribed on Heaven's hem.
I think I would put a comma after loved.
reply by the author on 13-Nov-2024
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This is an ably-written poem that appeals to a faith-seeking audience. I like the way you accent the use of rhyme and meter. There is a kind use of language here. Favorite line: The only time my lips will speak, will sing love's lullabies.
What an attractive blue-and-white presentation you created.
Suggestion in the last line:
To Him you're precious and you're loved inscribed on Heaven's hem.
I think I would put a comma after loved.
Comment Written 11-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 13-Nov-2024
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Thanks Crystie, for these super comments and a great review, blessings Roy
Comment from Sankey
AMEN! Bro, an excellent poem of the truth of God's word. Good works follow our repentance they do not lead to eternal life without God's grace.
There are a few spags in your Auhor notes, mate. Lord Bless.
reply by the author on 13-Nov-2024
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AMEN! Bro, an excellent poem of the truth of God's word. Good works follow our repentance they do not lead to eternal life without God's grace.
There are a few spags in your Auhor notes, mate. Lord Bless.
Comment Written 11-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 13-Nov-2024
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Thanks Bro. for these super comments and a great review, blessings Roy