The Mighty Canyon
Contemplation on a canyon top25 total reviews
Comment from Nicki.B
I love this poem Pam it really expressed the feelings you were going through, it's really sad. I'm sorry you had to go through that difficult time in your life, and glad that you got through it. Seems you always had a great flair for writing the fact you wrote this when your wer young. My daughter went through a really difficult time also in her late teens early 20s with anxiety and I felt helpless. She needed navigate her way through and figure out things too.
I'll miss you poems while you take a break hopefully it won't be too long before I see your gorgeous poems again
Best Wishes
Nicki x
reply by the author on 14-Nov-2024
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I love this poem Pam it really expressed the feelings you were going through, it's really sad. I'm sorry you had to go through that difficult time in your life, and glad that you got through it. Seems you always had a great flair for writing the fact you wrote this when your wer young. My daughter went through a really difficult time also in her late teens early 20s with anxiety and I felt helpless. She needed navigate her way through and figure out things too.
I'll miss you poems while you take a break hopefully it won't be too long before I see your gorgeous poems again
Best Wishes
Nicki x
Comment Written 13-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 14-Nov-2024
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Thank you Nikki for your wonderful words and a great review
I started it when I was young, but I polished it off when I was older. But I can still remember those feelings and the great conflict they created in my mind.
Comment from LJbutterfly
Your words are filled with emotional hurt, pain and confusion. Many young people become confused as they interact with people and try to find their place in the world. Thank God for all those who decided not to end it all, but to give life an additional day. It takes years to really find yourself and know yourself. Your poem takes the reader back to their own personal days in search of enlightenment.
reply by the author on 14-Nov-2024
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Your words are filled with emotional hurt, pain and confusion. Many young people become confused as they interact with people and try to find their place in the world. Thank God for all those who decided not to end it all, but to give life an additional day. It takes years to really find yourself and know yourself. Your poem takes the reader back to their own personal days in search of enlightenment.
Comment Written 13-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 14-Nov-2024
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Thank you LJ for letting me know that my words resonated with you and hopefully others
I appreciate your lovely review
Comment from Begin Again
A very moving poem for the reader and the person who traveled those treacherous steps. You expressed the twisted feelings so well, yet I sense the journey hasn't been completed yet. I hope your absence will only be a temporary one and you will return to share much more of your talent. Until then, take care and stay strong.
Smiles and hugs, Carol
reply by the author on 14-Nov-2024
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A very moving poem for the reader and the person who traveled those treacherous steps. You expressed the twisted feelings so well, yet I sense the journey hasn't been completed yet. I hope your absence will only be a temporary one and you will return to share much more of your talent. Until then, take care and stay strong.
Smiles and hugs, Carol
Comment Written 13-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 14-Nov-2024
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Thank you Carol for your well wishes your encouragement and a wonderful review
Comment from ESOSTINE
Thanks so much for sharing your past world, a poignant one in deed. I am glad you finally found a reason to overcome the challenges and stay alive. These your beautiful poems and many more things you represent would have been lost. Please leave a trail behind as you cap your pen on Fanstory for a while. Remain blessed, dear PAM.
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reply by the author on 14-Nov-2024
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Thanks so much for sharing your past world, a poignant one in deed. I am glad you finally found a reason to overcome the challenges and stay alive. These your beautiful poems and many more things you represent would have been lost. Please leave a trail behind as you cap your pen on Fanstory for a while. Remain blessed, dear PAM.
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Comment Written 13-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 14-Nov-2024
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Thank you so much esotine for your blessings and for a wonderful review
Comment from barbara.wilkey
Thank you for sharing this poem with us and these very real feelings. It causes me to wonder how many people have had these same feelings. I'm betting more than we know about.
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reply by the author on 14-Nov-2024
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Thank you for sharing this poem with us and these very real feelings. It causes me to wonder how many people have had these same feelings. I'm betting more than we know about.
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Comment Written 13-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 14-Nov-2024
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Thank you Barbara for your wonderful review