My Aunt Margaret
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Comment from Begin Again
At first I thought maybe she was a high-classed madam of some sort, but your twist was excellent and so unexpected. Great job with this one, Karen. Is it possible that Beverly has a few of her anunt's traits as well. She knows a lot about why women don't get caught.
Smiles, Carol
reply by the author on 21-Nov-2024
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At first I thought maybe she was a high-classed madam of some sort, but your twist was excellent and so unexpected. Great job with this one, Karen. Is it possible that Beverly has a few of her anunt's traits as well. She knows a lot about why women don't get caught.
Smiles, Carol
Comment Written 21-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 21-Nov-2024
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Thanks so much for the high Praise. This is a different way of writing for me. I have written four chapters so far. We will see how far it. does. Again, Thanks for the read. Karen
Comment from GWHARGIS
Well damn! That kind of explains the moving and the getting bored. Wonder if this woman is going to go back and look at places they have lived and match up deaths. Very interesting premise. Gretchen
reply by the author on 21-Nov-2024
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Well damn! That kind of explains the moving and the getting bored. Wonder if this woman is going to go back and look at places they have lived and match up deaths. Very interesting premise. Gretchen
Comment Written 21-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 21-Nov-2024
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I am just guessing, but I would think so. Unless the boxes answer all those pesky questions. Thanks for the Read.
Comment from zanya
An air of authenticity - checked back to see if it were fiction or not! Enthralling and engrossing -- wonder what happens next ? Interesting observations.
reply by the author on 21-Nov-2024
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An air of authenticity - checked back to see if it were fiction or not! Enthralling and engrossing -- wonder what happens next ? Interesting observations.
Comment Written 21-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 21-Nov-2024
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I have four written up, there may be more. Thanks for the read. Karen
Comment from Wayne Fowler
I love your analogies and metaphors. Whether you coined them or not, I don't know, but they are unique enough to feel fresh.
Great analysis of female serial killers, though I expect some male killers would compare.
Nicely written.
reply by the author on 21-Nov-2024
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I love your analogies and metaphors. Whether you coined them or not, I don't know, but they are unique enough to feel fresh.
Great analysis of female serial killers, though I expect some male killers would compare.
Nicely written.
Comment Written 21-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 21-Nov-2024
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I have been around a long time Babycakes, and I have been reading since I was three. When tv came on more often I gobbled up everything I could watch. Since I was Ill a lot and not active I read everything I could get my hands on. So, I have all this stuff in my brain, that I can pick and choose from, some old stuff, and some new combinations. Honestly, I don't know where it all comes from sometimes. :-) Karen
Comment from royowen
What an excellent story, I thought it might be true...for awhile, but then I go to the top of the page, and it was fiction, silly me I thought. Of course one would never write about things like, but remain discreet, a very quirky story, excellently done, out of left field, well done Karen, blessings Roy
reply by the author on 21-Nov-2024
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What an excellent story, I thought it might be true...for awhile, but then I go to the top of the page, and it was fiction, silly me I thought. Of course one would never write about things like, but remain discreet, a very quirky story, excellently done, out of left field, well done Karen, blessings Roy
Comment Written 21-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 21-Nov-2024
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My stuff is rarely plain dear friend. My mind does not go in a straight line. I meander hither and yon, before getting to a point so I wrap you up in the story as I go along. I am unique, just like everybody else! LOL Karen
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Yep, you sure are, as God made you, but not everybody has the courage to be what God created them to be so well done.
Comment from BethShelby
Neat story. It sounds like Beverly and Margaret are very much alike and in the end Beverly is shocked that her aunt is a serial killer but she sees to know a lot about why will kill and seldom get caught so I think she must be a serial killer as well.
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reply by the author on 21-Nov-2024
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Neat story. It sounds like Beverly and Margaret are very much alike and in the end Beverly is shocked that her aunt is a serial killer but she sees to know a lot about why will kill and seldom get caught so I think she must be a serial killer as well.
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Comment Written 21-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 21-Nov-2024
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I am not saying anything. Thanks for the read. I have written four so far. Karen
Comment from Tim Margetts
OK, I will admit, this did not go where I expected it to go.
At first, I am being totally honest I wasn't sure it was for me, but I read on.
And then, you slap me round the face; hard.
Tim x
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reply by the author on 21-Nov-2024
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OK, I will admit, this did not go where I expected it to go.
At first, I am being totally honest I wasn't sure it was for me, but I read on.
And then, you slap me round the face; hard.
Tim x
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Comment Written 21-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 21-Nov-2024
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Now that you mention it, it is a bit like Dexter. And I liked it too. Except for his whiney girlfriend. My stories are never what people expect. Thanks for the read. Karen
