Herbert Hanover
Almost all alliteration25 total reviews
Comment from Marilyn Hamilton
Alliteration is your strong-suit. Cute story but that gigantic spider makes me nervous! lol i've been without power for 40 hours. and how was your thanksgiving? lol
reply by the author on 01-Dec-2024
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Alliteration is your strong-suit. Cute story but that gigantic spider makes me nervous! lol i've been without power for 40 hours. and how was your thanksgiving? lol
Comment Written 30-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 01-Dec-2024
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My sisters and me played two old games. Racko and Yahoo. I won 3 out of 5. We laughed like lunatics. I usually try to use only words starting with the same letter. But, trying that the other day made it clumsy.
It flowed much better with the occasional alien word.
Thanks for the read. And I try to find pictures that effortlessly blend, but nothing exactly fit. So, I went to my standby, humor. Happy Holidays. Karen :-)
Comment from Ric Myworld
I've have to say you might very well be the alliteration queen, but I think I've said that before, and maybe even a few times more. But it's so very true. Thanks for sharing.
reply by the author on 01-Dec-2024
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I've have to say you might very well be the alliteration queen, but I think I've said that before, and maybe even a few times more. But it's so very true. Thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 30-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 01-Dec-2024
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I usually try to use only words starting with the same letter. But, trying that the other day made it clumsy.
It flowed much better with the occasional alien word.
Thanks for the read. And I try to find pictures that effortlessly blend, but nothing exactly fit. So, I went to my standby, humor. Happy Holidays. Karen :-)
Comment from Cecilia A Heiskary
Karen,
This is a great poem. It sure does have a lot of H's in it. You have a knack for that though. This poem flows smoothly for beginning to end and the picture is wonderful. That's one big spider in that shower (LOL)
Well done my friend
Cecilia
reply by the author on 01-Dec-2024
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Karen,
This is a great poem. It sure does have a lot of H's in it. You have a knack for that though. This poem flows smoothly for beginning to end and the picture is wonderful. That's one big spider in that shower (LOL)
Well done my friend
Cecilia
Comment Written 30-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 01-Dec-2024
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I usually try to use only words starting with the same letter. But, trying that the other day made it clumsy.
It flowed much better with the occasional alien word.
Thanks for the read. And I try to find pictures that effortlessly blend, but nothing exactly fit. So, I went to my standby, humor. Happy Holidays. Karen :-)
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Karen,
You did well. I can't even think of that many words with the same letter. I think I fried my brain when I was younger. LOL
Comment from Jesse James Doty
You did a good job with alliteration in the story about Herbert Hanover and his family get-together. I smiled to myself at some of the choices for words that started with the sound of 'h.' I have one question. What does the word homelies mean? Did you mean to write homilies?
Anyway, this is fun entertaining stuff!
Jesse
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reply by the author on 01-Dec-2024
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You did a good job with alliteration in the story about Herbert Hanover and his family get-together. I smiled to myself at some of the choices for words that started with the sound of 'h.' I have one question. What does the word homelies mean? Did you mean to write homilies?
Anyway, this is fun entertaining stuff!
Jesse
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Comment Written 30-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 01-Dec-2024
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You are right and I edited, Thank you. I usually try to use only words starting with the same letter. But, trying that the other day made it clumsy.
It flowed much better with the occasional alien word.
Thanks for the read. And I try to find pictures that effortlessly blend, but nothing exactly fit. So, I went to my standby, humor. Happy Holidays. Karen :-)
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Glad I could help.
On this site, you, Karen, are the queen of comedy. No one does humor better.
Jesse
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Really? I think I am blushing. My Momma was the queen of funny. She saw it in everything.
I miss her. So, I guess I am carrying the torch. Karen
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That's right! Carry the torch proudly since it reminds you of your mother!
Jesse
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This highlights my dark humor.
My husband #1 was a firefighter who was riding along with EMT's to get qualified. They pulled up at a house where a staionwagon had pinned the man to the wall. He had left the car running and apparently the garage door opener wasn't working, so he went to go push the button beside the garage door. He got pinned to the unopened garage door by his car, he was still holding his order from Burger King. He told me it was still warm. I asked who ate it? He ran to the sink and threw up. He quit riding with the ambulance. I can be very dark:-)
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Oh no! That's pretty dark!
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I can be dark sometimes. But I find the funny in most things.
:-)
Comment from Douglas Goff
Very nicely done, Miss Karen. I love poetry that tells a story, especially an interesting one!
Well done, my friend. I enjoyed this one. Very enjoyable.
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Very nicely done, Miss Karen. I love poetry that tells a story, especially an interesting one!
Well done, my friend. I enjoyed this one. Very enjoyable.
D
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Comment Written 30-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 01-Dec-2024
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I usually try to use only words starting with the same letter. But, trying that the other day made it clumsy.
It flowed much better with the occasional alien word.
Thanks for the read. And I try to find pictures that effortlessly blend, but nothing exactly fit. So, I went to my standby, humor. Happy Holidays. Karen :-)