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One Year to Gold

A Merry~go~Rhyme for Sally and Jack Law

43 total reviews 
Comment from nomi338
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As one who recently celebrated 50 years plus 1, I join Sally and her hubby Jack in their celebration. May God continue richly blessing their union and its anticipated very happy future. Your wonderful poem is I am sure an awesome addition to their happy celebration. Another great celebration.

 Comment Written 14-Dec-2024


reply by the author on 15-Dec-2024
    Nomi, I worried about you when I wrote this. I know you are still going through a hard time. I am praying for you.

    I thank you so very much for the lovely as always review and kind words to go with it for our Sally and Jack and their poem. I appreciate it so very much, my dear BBBB. Lotsa love, Debi
Comment from l.raven
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HI Debi, my last six stars my wonderful friend
go to Sally and Jack...
I love hearing about about their lives...it's so rare
to hear about unconditional love like theirs anymore...
there are still some out there...but so few...

I always remember my mom and dad...64 years...scary...LOL

I think it is wonderful they stand together...take care of each
other...and when they look into each others eye's...all they see
are Sally and Jack...sooo in love...

what a wonderful poem my beautiful friend...and your pictures
are priceless....and one of my favorite songs Chicago ever sang...
Color My World...I LOVE all of them...very well written you...love much...Linda xxoo

 Comment Written 13-Dec-2024


reply by the author on 15-Dec-2024
    Oh Linda, you are the best and I can't thank you enough for all the lovely words for the poem and for the sweetest bride and groom. I still can't believe they are right behind Glen and me. Thanks for the six stars too, my angelic friend. Love you! Debi
reply by the author on 15-Dec-2024
    Oh Linda, you are the best and I can't thank you enough for all the lovely words for the poem and for the sweetest bride and groom. I still can't believe they are right behind Glen and me. Thanks for the six stars too, my angelic friend. Love you! Debi
reply by l.raven on 16-Dec-2024
    all my love to you and Glen as well...
    when love...is true love...it's for a
    lifetime...sigh...love to you all...
    Sally and Jack...you and Glen...
    you earn every star given...xxoo
    🤗❤️🌼🙏⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐
Comment from EILEEN LAW
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What a sweet poem about a family. It spared no tragedy and rejoiced in the acheivements and family love.

It was nice to read this story written in pros

 Comment Written 13-Dec-2024


reply by the author on 15-Dec-2024
    Hi Eileen, I thank you so very much for the lovely as always review and kind words to go with it for our Sally and Jack and their poem. I appreciate it so very much, my dear friend. love, Debi
Comment from royowen
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Oh yes, I really appreciate you for writing this wonderful tribute for Jack and Sally, in that wonderful, caring way that you do Debi, they are a magic couple, I appreciate Sally because her spiritual perception of knowing God as her total dependence and source of wisdom is inspiring to me. Beautifully written Debi blessings Roy

 Comment Written 13-Dec-2024


reply by the author on 15-Dec-2024
    Hey Roy, I thank you so very much for the lovely as always review and kind words to go with it for our Sally and Jack and their poem. I appreciate it so very much, my dear friend. Lotsa love, Debi
reply by royowen on 15-Dec-2024
    Good girl
Comment from Carol Hillebrenner
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Lots of love songs for Sally and Jack. Your poem is a good one with the emphasis on gold. Just one more year to that half century mark. It isn't totally easy to have all those years lived with the additions and losses.

 Comment Written 13-Dec-2024


reply by the author on 20-Dec-2024
    Thanks so very much, Carol, for the kindest and such a special review for my Sally and Jack's anniversary. I sure appreciate you and I know Jack and Sally will too.

    Sorry it is so late; this is what happens when she has too many in a row and many thank you's to do. I appreciate you very much. Love, Debi
Comment from lyenochka
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Thank you for highlighting the events of the union of Sally and Jack. They're an amazing couple just like you and Glen are amazing. God has seen you all through all the joys and trials as you grew deeper in love together!

 Comment Written 13-Dec-2024


reply by the author on 20-Dec-2024
    Thanks so very much, Helen, for the kindest and such a special review for Sally and Jack's poem. I sure appreciate you and the sweet comments. I love it!

    Sorry it is so late; this is what happens when she has too many in a row and many thank you's to do. I appreciate it very much. Love, Debi
Comment from jake cosmos aller
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another great tribute poem to another Fan story writer. Love these lines

Now Adam has Nichole, yet we don't know what is their plan

And Sally still is mesmerized by Jack, her loving man

We wish them both a Very Happy Anniversary

And we all know they have the kind of love that's meant to be

 Comment Written 13-Dec-2024


reply by the author on 20-Dec-2024
    Thanks so very much, Jale, for the kindest and such a special review for Sally and Jack's poem. I sure appreciate you and the sweet comments. I love it!

    Sorry it is so late; this is what happens when she has too many in a row and many thank you's to do. I appreciate it very much. Love, Debi
Comment from Marilyn Hamilton
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What an achievement! Congratulations Sally and Jack. Enjoy this year as you move toward the golden anniversary! Wishing you health and blessings...

 Comment Written 13-Dec-2024


reply by the author on 20-Dec-2024
    Thanks so very much, Marilyn, for the kindest and such a special review for Sally and Jack's poe. I sure appreciate you and the sweet comments. I love it!

    Sorry it is so late; this is what happens when she has too many in a row and many thank you's to do. I appreciate it very much. Love, Debi
Comment from Peter Jarvis
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The continuation of your poem beautifully rounds off the celebration of Sally and Jack's enduring love and commitment. The rhythm and rhyme maintain the flow, and the heartfelt sentiments shine through. It's a touching tribute to a couple who have shared a lifetime of joys and challenges together.

Your poem not only celebrates their past but also looks forward to the future with optimism and gratitude. The notion of reaching "gold" signifies both the preciousness of their relationship and the milestone of their 50th anniversary.







 Comment Written 13-Dec-2024


reply by the author on 20-Dec-2024
    Thanks so very much, Peter, for the kindest and such a special review for Sally and Jack's anniversary poem. I sure appreciate you and the sweet comments. I love it!

    Sorry it is so late; this is what happens when she has too many in a row and many thank you's to do. I appreciate it very much. Love, Debi
reply by Peter Jarvis on 20-Dec-2024
    Take care
Comment from Verna Cole Mitchell
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Happy Anniversary to Sally and Jack. What a special couple they are. Through thick and thin, their devotion does not fade. May 50 bring them great happiness, as well as the year leading up to it. May they be blessed by God.

 Comment Written 13-Dec-2024


reply by the author on 20-Dec-2024
    Thanks so very much, Verna, for the kindest and such a special review for my Sally and Jack's poem. I sure appreciate you and the sweet comments. I love it and love you, sis.

    Sorry it is so late; this is what happens when she has too many in a row and many thank you's to do. I appreciate it very much. Love, Debi