Comment from tempeste

Excellent

They can be very entertaining, especially when there is mud near-by.

They love to play and roll in it like my dogs used to .

Kids can get up to some crazy situations and despite the mess , parents laugh their heads off and even take a pic to post it on social media.

 Comment Written 19-Jan-2025

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reply by the author on 19-Jan-2025

Thanks for the awesome review and fun comments. I do appreciate them very much. Also the kind wishes for the contest.

Comment from Charles D Ezell

Excellent

For sure. One of the most beautiful sites on earth. Always enjoy the presence of children you may learn a lot of what you think you know, Good post best in the contest.

 Comment Written 19-Jan-2025

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reply by the author on 19-Jan-2025

Thanks for the awesome review and fun comments. I do appreciate them very much. Also the kind wishes for the contest.

Comment from Dr. Nad

Exceptional

It may have been only 20 syllables but this was an excellent poem. But please don't be disappointed in the next thing I say. The picture clinched it for me. My guess is you've had quite a few comments about that wonderful picture that was a perfect illustration of the Fantastic 20 syllable she put together.

 Comment Written 19-Jan-2025

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reply by the author on 19-Jan-2025

Thanks for the awesome review and fun comments. I do appreciate them very much. Also the kind wishes for the contest.
Also thank you so much for honor of your six stars.

reply by Dr. Nad on 21-Jan-2025

You're most welcome sis for everything blessings on you

Comment from DonandVicki

Excellent

It always puts joy in my heart when I watch children at play and make believe. Jesus loved the innocents of the little children and dammed those that would hurt them.

 Comment Written 18-Jan-2025

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reply by the author on 19-Jan-2025

Thanks for the awesome review and fun comments. I do appreciate them very much. Also the kind wishes for the contest.

Comment from Mintybee

Excellent

This twenty syllable poem of two rhymed lines is simple and sweet. The ending line could be a bit stronger, but it gives us the possibility to choose for ourselves to go find happiness.
MIntybee

 Comment Written 18-Jan-2025

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reply by the author on 18-Jan-2025

Hi Mintybee, I gave some thought to what you said, and I love great feedback, so I changed my poem to go like this:

When you take time to watch children at play
It may be the best part of your whole day

I just wanted you to know how much I appreciate your thoughts and I thank you so very much.

reply by Mintybee on 20-Jan-2025

I'm glad my feedback was helpful. I like that new line. Best wishes in the contest!

Comment from CM Pickard

Good

A cute short poem, it meets the prompt rules and has a lot of fun in it. You've chosen your words carefully and when read out loud it has a really nice ring to it . Well done.

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 Comment Written 18-Jan-2025

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reply by the author on 19-Jan-2025

Thanks for the awesome review and fun comments. I do appreciate them very much. Also the kind wishes for the contest.

With a four star you are supposed to tell what you think I could have done better. I am always open to good suggestions. Thank you.

Comment from ESOSTINE

Excellent

This is very true of which many people can relate to. Children are full of fun, joy and innocence. I always share in there joy when I watch them play in their purity. Good job, my friend. Good luck with the contest.

 Comment Written 18-Jan-2025

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reply by the author on 19-Jan-2025

Thanks for the awesome review and fun comments. I do appreciate them very much. Also the kind wishes for the contest.

Comment from Marilyn Hamilton

Excellent

An excellent entry for the 20 Syllables writing prompt. Children can change your entire perspective on a day and on life. They are the closest thing to innocence. The picture chosen for this presentation is perfect. Nicely done.

 Comment Written 18-Jan-2025

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reply by the author on 19-Jan-2025

Thanks for the awesome review and fun comments. I do appreciate them very much. Also the kind wishes for the contest.

Comment from Shanbreen

Excellent

First, I love the visual. Your words do justice to it. It may not brighten my whole day, but it certainly does brighten the moment. Best of the contest and thanks for sharing.

 Comment Written 18-Jan-2025

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reply by the author on 19-Jan-2025

Thanks for the awesome review and fun comments. I do appreciate them very much. Also the kind wishes for the contest.

Comment from nancyjam

Excellent

This is so true. I love watching them play. Their smiles and giggles
bring a smile to my face. Nicely done. Good luck in the contest.
Nancy

 Comment Written 18-Jan-2025

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reply by the author on 19-Jan-2025

Thanks for the awesome review and fun comments. I do appreciate them very much. Also the kind wishes for the contest.