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Am I Dead?

A Story About a Motorcycle Wreck.

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Comment from Michael Ludwinder
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Wow, your story had me hooked from the start! The way you described your adventures with Kenny made me feel like I was right there. I was riding through the trails and pulling pranks. That moment when the accident happened was intense. Your near death experience was absolutely chilling. The way you shared your emotions was so powerful. Your reflection at the end will really stick with me - it's amazing how life can take such unexpected turns. This was such a heartfelt read. I'm so glad you made it through to share this story!

 Comment Written 21-Feb-2025


reply by the author on 24-Feb-2025
    Well, thank you so much Michael. As usual, I truly appreciate the great review and kind words! I guess we really never know why we are here...
Comment from evilynne
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Wow, that is some story. You were very lucky to survive such an injury and were foolish to ride without proper protection. It was the will of God that you should survive, and he let you know this in his own way. The story is very well written. Evi

 Comment Written 21-Feb-2025


reply by the author on 24-Feb-2025
    Yes, Evilynne. You are right on two issues. I was a fool to take off without at least my helmet. And I think this was God's way of telling me what a fool I was...Thank you so much for the great review and kind words!
Comment from royowen
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Well, I can tell you, you have convinced me, not because you said it, but I have felt that feeling, it's not of this Earth, it is pure love itself, I felt it as a non believer, driving home from work, it started the events that led up to the revelation of Christ. That was forty years ago, I was a drunk, and compulsive gambler, a smoker, God told me to stop, and I did. My kids never started any of these things, I was a much better father, friend, hubby, because now I had hope. You just have to tell people what you just wrote, you know about the light of the world, you are His voice here, beautifully written, blessings Roy

 Comment Written 21-Feb-2025


reply by the author on 24-Feb-2025
    Thank you so much Roy! I truly believe you are right. I am only here for a reason. Not sure what it is yet. I truly appreciate your great review and kind words!
reply by royowen on 24-Feb-2025
    Well done
reply by the author on 24-Feb-2025
    Thanks Roy!
reply by royowen on 24-Feb-2025
    Welcome Harry
reply by the author on 24-Feb-2025
    Roger that!
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
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Are you the man who has nine lives Harry or maybe you are James Bond? It sounds like you have walked away from a few tragedies in your life and survived. I hope you are a little more careful these days, love Dolly x x x

 Comment Written 21-Feb-2025


reply by the author on 24-Feb-2025
    Lol! Well, Dolly. I think I am a tragedy magnet! I have survived 9 car wrecks (None of which were my fault), 4 motorcycles wrecks - some because I was young and foolish. I have shot twice...Numerous fights which I never started and a few more things in life. I am here for a reason, but I think it is as a crash test dummy! Thank you so much for the great review! I truly appreciate you!
reply by Dolly'sPoems on 24-Feb-2025
    You made me smile Harry, you certainly have lived life on the edge! I have had a few near missed when I was in the Police! Ha ha ha x x x
reply by the author on 24-Feb-2025
    Well, thank you Dolly. I bet you did!
Comment from Debbie D'Arcy
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I can't believe how many stories you have to recount, Harry, and all of them stunning with a profound message or theme. How you survived this is a miracle and your descriptive details, still so lucid to you, are inspiring and poignant. The fact that you treated this horrific accident almost dismissively reflects your amazing character and fortitude and the reason you were sent straight back down that tunnel! God must have known you were invincible:)) Well done! Warm wishes Debbie

 Comment Written 21-Feb-2025


reply by the author on 21-Feb-2025
    I know right? My friend told me one time to write a book and I told him. If I wrote about what I have experienced in life, no one would believe me.
Comment from Marilyn Hamilton
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I love hearing stories like these and I definitely believe every word. There is so much more in this world than we know or can understand. You were given a life extension that day. Thanks for sharing.

 Comment Written 21-Feb-2025


reply by the author on 21-Feb-2025
    Thank you so much Marilyn. Yes, I believe I was given that...
Comment from barbara.wilkey
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Your summer of 1974 sounds very much like my grandson, Jace's life. He does the dirt bikes and has a trail at my mom's farm. He's 19 years old. I enjoyed reading.

spending time with my best friend Kenny during the (friend, & and some would say also a comma after Kenny, I'll leave that up to you.)

He said, "I am not sure he is going to make it through the night." My mom said, "What!?" The doctor told her I had a triple skull fracture, and the survival rate for that is not too good. (Two dialogues in one paragraph, they need separate paragraphs.)

The next day, I woke up with a bad headache. (The following day)

 Comment Written 21-Feb-2025


reply by the author on 21-Feb-2025
    Thank you so much Barbara. I truly appreciate the review and ideas too!
Comment from Begin Again
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Oh, Harry, you never cease to amaze me or send me searching for another sweater because of the chills. My husband had a similar out-of-body experience so I do believe you. My answers have always come from other ways, but then I wasn't "wild" like you or my husband. I'm sure you have done exactly what God intended in many ways.
Smiles and hugs, Carol

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 Comment Written 21-Feb-2025


reply by the author on 21-Feb-2025
    Well, thank you Carol. I sure hope so!