Thelma and Louise Join FanStory
For fun~ any words or puns related to crime are in bold font39 total reviews
Comment from Debbie D'Arcy
Haha! I loved that film! And what an imaginative idea to get them going straight and joining FS. I also like the way you add that little touch of fun with all those crime-related words or phrases. You made it too easy for us, though, by putting them in bold font. We didn't have to work for our money:)) Just a pleasure to read your delightful, fun post! Well done, Debi! Love Debbie
PS Can we have some more of these please?
reply by the author on 03-Mar-2025
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Haha! I loved that film! And what an imaginative idea to get them going straight and joining FS. I also like the way you add that little touch of fun with all those crime-related words or phrases. You made it too easy for us, though, by putting them in bold font. We didn't have to work for our money:)) Just a pleasure to read your delightful, fun post! Well done, Debi! Love Debbie
PS Can we have some more of these please?
Comment Written 02-Mar-2025
reply by the author on 03-Mar-2025
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Hi Debbie, thanks for reading and reviewing both my pieces today. Also for the very kind comments for this one. I I didn't plan the second one, but now ran out of my limited time on the iPad. I will be by to see you tomorrow. I promise. Thanks again! Love, Debi
Comment from lyenochka
Lol! This was fun. So since you're the rhymester, you must be Louise but who's the Thelma character? It's good that we all met here and can use our writing to go flying off into the skies.
reply by the author on 02-Mar-2025
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Lol! This was fun. So since you're the rhymester, you must be Louise but who's the Thelma character? It's good that we all met here and can use our writing to go flying off into the skies.
Comment Written 02-Mar-2025
reply by the author on 02-Mar-2025
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Thanks so much, Helen and yes, our dear K is Thelma. However, this is about the real ones as we aren't quite that bad. LOL.
Love ya, Debi
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Comment from barbara.wilkey
This is a cute poem. I don't write poetry, so I am not exactly sure of the rules. In prose dialogue should be in quotation marks. Is it not so for poetry. If not, then I'm sorry I said anything. If it needs quotation mark, you have dialogue in this poem and need to add them. The poem/story is absolutely adorable.
reply by the author on 03-Mar-2025
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This is a cute poem. I don't write poetry, so I am not exactly sure of the rules. In prose dialogue should be in quotation marks. Is it not so for poetry. If not, then I'm sorry I said anything. If it needs quotation mark, you have dialogue in this poem and need to add them. The poem/story is absolutely adorable.
Comment Written 02-Mar-2025
reply by the author on 03-Mar-2025
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Hi Barb, I completely understand that if I used punctuation in my poetry, I would be using quotation marks. But punctuation is up to the poet. It is neither wrong or right, whatever way you choose to do it. So, because I use just a needed comma from time to time, but nothing else, I would rather everyone just read freely. I learned that in my college writing that it was each individual's preference. I think it messes it up more than anything.
Thanks though! And thank you for the nice comments. BTW, the use of the word, "And" is allowed in the beginning lines of poetry, so I try to be careful I don't use it in my prose. Thanks again, hon!! Love, Debi
Comment from LJbutterfly
Haha! This is so clever and humorous. In your effort to have a little fun with poetry, you've provided fun for your readers. I enjoyed the rhythm and rhyming using words related to crime. You put an afternoon smile on my face.
reply by the author on 04-Mar-2025
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Haha! This is so clever and humorous. In your effort to have a little fun with poetry, you've provided fun for your readers. I enjoyed the rhythm and rhyming using words related to crime. You put an afternoon smile on my face.
Comment Written 02-Mar-2025
reply by the author on 04-Mar-2025
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I love that neither of us are "Running" out of ideas for fun in our post. Haha.
So, thanks Lorraine, so very much for this wonderful review and kind comments for my poem, T&L
I appreciate you very much, my dear friend.
Love, Debi
Comment from patcelaw
This is a very cleverly written poem, telling a story. I liked your idea of using words that you would find in the case of a crime in your poem, and you made them in bold letters. Very nicely done.
reply by the author on 04-Mar-2025
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This is a very cleverly written poem, telling a story. I liked your idea of using words that you would find in the case of a crime in your poem, and you made them in bold letters. Very nicely done.
Comment Written 02-Mar-2025
reply by the author on 04-Mar-2025
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Hi Patricia, gosh, thanks so very much for this wonderful review and kind comments for my poem, T& L.
I appreciate you very much, my dear friend.
Love, Debi
Comment from Pam Lonsdale
I guess you were having another one of those moments when you need to be silly. This was a fun one, and the cartoon characters were part of the fun. It's good to see you doing some new things; for instance, I enjoyed it when you took part in the Little Worshop of Horrors prompt. You should try the current one with the mannequins.
Visiting the site for the day, then I'm off for another wee.
Have a good week, Sis.
xoxo
reply by the author on 04-Mar-2025
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I guess you were having another one of those moments when you need to be silly. This was a fun one, and the cartoon characters were part of the fun. It's good to see you doing some new things; for instance, I enjoyed it when you took part in the Little Worshop of Horrors prompt. You should try the current one with the mannequins.
Visiting the site for the day, then I'm off for another wee.
Have a good week, Sis.
xoxo
Comment Written 02-Mar-2025
reply by the author on 04-Mar-2025
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Hey Pam, I am so glad that I got to see you anyway before you signed out.
Yes, I did have some fun. You know I may have to look at Marilyns club again. I do have some birthdays coming up to write for first. We will see. I love hearing your opinion, and it always means the world to me.
So, thanks so very much for this wonderful review and kind comments for my poem, T& L.
I appreciate you very much, my dear sis, bd twin and friend.
Love, Debi
Comment from royowen
What a crazy film that was, Thelma and Louise, I don't think they liked this world, but it was a terrific story and made a very different film. Yes, perhaps the answer was to come and write on fanstory to advance their cause and minister writing as a cushion for them driving off a cliff. Beautifully written Debi, blessings Roy
reply by the author on 04-Mar-2025
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What a crazy film that was, Thelma and Louise, I don't think they liked this world, but it was a terrific story and made a very different film. Yes, perhaps the answer was to come and write on fanstory to advance their cause and minister writing as a cushion for them driving off a cliff. Beautifully written Debi, blessings Roy
Comment Written 02-Mar-2025
reply by the author on 04-Mar-2025
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Hahaha, Roy, you are so funny. I love your response to T & L.
So, thanks so very much for this wonderful review and kind comments for my poem, T& L.
I appreciate you very much, my dear friend.
Love, Debi
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Well done Debi
Comment from Marilyn Hamilton
Lol you were inspired with this one. Lots of fun to read. Great rhythm and rhyme. I only have one issue. Why isn't young Brad Pitt in the story or att least a picture of him. :-)
reply by the author on 04-Mar-2025
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Lol you were inspired with this one. Lots of fun to read. Great rhythm and rhyme. I only have one issue. Why isn't young Brad Pitt in the story or att least a picture of him. :-)
Comment Written 02-Mar-2025
reply by the author on 04-Mar-2025
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Hi Marilyn, Terry asked me that same question. I didn't include Brad cause I am Louise and Karenina is Thelma, and she got the guy. Dang! LOL.
So thanks so very much for this wonderful review and kind comments for my poem, T& L.
I appreciate you very much, my dear friend.
Love, Debi
Comment from Neonewman
This is a clever write, Debi. The Rhyme was flawless and fun. I loved the movie, and the ending was sad. But maybe, somehow they survived. I love your creativity.
God bless,
Steve
reply by the author on 04-Mar-2025
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This is a clever write, Debi. The Rhyme was flawless and fun. I loved the movie, and the ending was sad. But maybe, somehow they survived. I love your creativity.
God bless,
Steve
Comment Written 02-Mar-2025
reply by the author on 04-Mar-2025
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Gosh, Steve, thanks so very much for this wonderful review and kind comments for my poem, T& L.
I appreciate you very much, my dear friend.
Love, Debi
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It's always a pleasure, Debi.
Comment from jmdg1954
Debi,
Very well penned, rhymed and presented! This was (sorry) is a fun read, though with an unfortunate ending.
Who knows, maybe Butch Cassidy and The Sundance Kid will join as well.
These poems are the ones that make a person smile.
Love ya, sis.
John
reply by the author on 02-Mar-2025
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Debi,
Very well penned, rhymed and presented! This was (sorry) is a fun read, though with an unfortunate ending.
Who knows, maybe Butch Cassidy and The Sundance Kid will join as well.
These poems are the ones that make a person smile.
Love ya, sis.
John
Comment Written 02-Mar-2025
reply by the author on 02-Mar-2025
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Hi John, this started to tell how Karenina and I started calling ourselves Thelma and Louise a couple years ago and for a good reason. Certainly not because we are criminals but because we are little rebels sometimes, and for other reasons. So there was a good reason. But as I went on I didn't feel good about telling personal things we have shared so I changed it.
That's my story and I'm sticking to it. Haha!
Thanks for the read. Love ya too, dear bro! Debi
