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God never planned my death

A poem

32 total reviews 
Comment from jim vecchio
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There are some that believe all will go to Heaven, perhaps spend some time in Purgatory first. But, that is a lie.Hell was not prepared for us, it was for the devil and his angels. But, if you set a mouse trap and your dog gets caught in it, it's because he ventured into areas he should have stayed away from. So it is with hell. If we follow The Savior and be where we should be, Heaven awaits us.

 Comment Written 10-Mar-2025


reply by the author on 14-Mar-2025
    Thanks Jim, for these super comments, and a great review, blessings Roy
Comment from Harry Craft
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Another great poem Roy. I truly appreciated reading this one and thanks for sharing your great writing talents. I truly believe that one can be saved since we are all sinners and must die. We must pray to our saviour. Keep up the great work!

 Comment Written 10-Mar-2025


reply by the author on 14-Mar-2025
    Thanks Harry, for these super comments, and a great review, blessings Roy
reply by Harry Craft on 17-Mar-2025
    Roger that Roy!
Comment from Marilyn Hamilton
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Beautifully written, Roy. There is nothing we can do to reach the sinless perfection needed for Heaven. We can only believe and accept the gift of Christ. Thanks for sharing.

 Comment Written 10-Mar-2025


reply by the author on 14-Mar-2025
    Thanks Marilyn, for these super comments, and a great review, blessings Roy
Comment from RJ Heritage
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Hi Rowen, nice hearing from you. I think that at times we mix up God's all knowing ability with His purposefull grace. Your poem clarifies this nicely. He knows when each of us will die, but His is pursose is for us to live and have life abundantly. Beautiful and true words.
RJ

 Comment Written 10-Mar-2025


reply by the author on 14-Mar-2025
    Thanks RJ, , for these super comments, and a great review, blessings Roy
reply by RJ Heritage on 14-Mar-2025
    My pleasure
    RJ
Comment from Cecilia A Heiskary
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Roy,

This is a beautiful poem. I would expect no less from you. People do live under a false belief that they are going to heaven for just being good. There will be a lot of disappointed people when Jesus returns.

Well done

Cecilia

 Comment Written 10-Mar-2025


reply by the author on 14-Mar-2025
    Thanks Cecilia, for these super comments, and a great review, blessings Roy
Comment from Michael Ludwinder
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I really loved your poem! The line "He paid my ransom, paid sin's cost" is so powerful. It's shows the immense sacrifice made for us. The idea of wearing "compassion's gown" and a "kingly crown" speaks beautifully of the reward that comes through faith. Your writing is inspiring and truly uplifting!

 Comment Written 10-Mar-2025


reply by the author on 14-Mar-2025
    Thanks Michael, for these super comments, and a great review, blessings Roy
Comment from Begin Again
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I love the fact that you state that our Lord willingly gave a gift which we call eternity and accepted all our sins. His only request was that we believe and honor him. He loves all of us more than we will ever be able to understand.
Smiles, Carol

 Comment Written 10-Mar-2025


reply by the author on 14-Mar-2025
    Thanks Carol, for these super comments, and a great review, blessings Roy
Comment from Patrice Alves
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Bravo, Bravo!!! Fellow believer(Clapping). Yes, that is what we need.(Clapping) I LOVE this.
(He cleared my name when all seemed lost.) Come on, I Love This, I Love This. Well Done!!!

 Comment Written 10-Mar-2025


reply by the author on 14-Mar-2025
    Thanks Patrice, for these super comments, and a great review, blessings Roy
Comment from dragonpoet
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Hi Roy,
This is poem is a good reminder that Heaven isn't a promise, it is a gift.
We need faith and good works and then maybe we will make it to where we wish to to in the end.
Keep writing and stay healthy
Have a great rest of of the day and week.
Joan

 Comment Written 10-Mar-2025


reply by the author on 14-Mar-2025
    Thanks Joan, for these super comments, and a great review, blessings Roy
reply by dragonpoet on 14-Mar-2025
    You’re very welcome on both counts, Roy.
    Joan
reply by the author on 14-Mar-2025
    Bless you
Comment from bob cullen
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You conclude your notes by saying, 'Thanks for reading.' May I then commence my review by saying. 'Thanks for writing.'
A very timely reminder, we should all take not of. Sorry, I didn't have a six.

 Comment Written 10-Mar-2025


reply by the author on 14-Mar-2025
    Thanks Bob, for super comments Bob, and a great review, blessings Roy