Reminiscing
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Comment from patcelaw
This is beautifully written I very much enjoyed listening to it. Just as a sidenote, I have been in Rolla Missouri many times my oldest sister and her husband I want a newspaper in Rolla for many years then they sold that paper and went to Wilcox, Arizona, where they bought a new newspaper and After many years retired as millionaires. I enjoyed your story very much, and Scooby Doo sounds like a wonderful thing to have around. Patricia.
reply by the author on 03-Apr-2025
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This is beautifully written I very much enjoyed listening to it. Just as a sidenote, I have been in Rolla Missouri many times my oldest sister and her husband I want a newspaper in Rolla for many years then they sold that paper and went to Wilcox, Arizona, where they bought a new newspaper and After many years retired as millionaires. I enjoyed your story very much, and Scooby Doo sounds like a wonderful thing to have around. Patricia.
Comment Written 02-Apr-2025
reply by the author on 03-Apr-2025
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Thank you for understanding.
Comment from Mistydawn
This is a cute post about your son. He's right as big as he is I doubt if anyone is brave enough to say anything child or adult. Your story is well-written, very interesting, thanks for sharing the memory and for the laugh.
PS. I still have the alligator my grandmother used to put behind me when I was little to keep me from rolling off the bed.
reply by the author on 02-Apr-2025
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This is a cute post about your son. He's right as big as he is I doubt if anyone is brave enough to say anything child or adult. Your story is well-written, very interesting, thanks for sharing the memory and for the laugh.
PS. I still have the alligator my grandmother used to put behind me when I was little to keep me from rolling off the bed.
Comment Written 02-Apr-2025
reply by the author on 02-Apr-2025
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Thank you for sharing your story. I appreciate the support.
Comment from CrystieCookie999
This non-fiction account is full of humor, honesty, and human interest. It also felt down to earth and heart-warming. We Scooby Doo fans ought to stick together. The only suggestion I had was to capitalize 'Mother' in the sentence: When I frustrate him, I'm 'mother'. That is because he really was calling you by a title.
reply by the author on 02-Apr-2025
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This non-fiction account is full of humor, honesty, and human interest. It also felt down to earth and heart-warming. We Scooby Doo fans ought to stick together. The only suggestion I had was to capitalize 'Mother' in the sentence: When I frustrate him, I'm 'mother'. That is because he really was calling you by a title.
Comment Written 02-Apr-2025
reply by the author on 02-Apr-2025
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You're correct and I made that change. Thank you for the support.
Comment from Alexandra Trovato
This is an excellent story and I enjoyed reading about your boys as your famil6 grew older. And I do love Scooby Doo. Your descriptions are very good. I do suggest that you reread to make sure your verbs are all in the tenses that support your storyline since you do refer to your past present and future.
Best wishes,
Alex :)
reply by the author on 02-Apr-2025
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This is an excellent story and I enjoyed reading about your boys as your famil6 grew older. And I do love Scooby Doo. Your descriptions are very good. I do suggest that you reread to make sure your verbs are all in the tenses that support your storyline since you do refer to your past present and future.
Best wishes,
Alex :)
Comment Written 02-Apr-2025
reply by the author on 02-Apr-2025
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Thank you for the support and I will reread.
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Just in case. It was not clear to me. Good. Alex
Comment from jim vecchio
No need for editing. This was fine. Your children will truly love it when your book is done, though I hope it won't be for a long time. I enjoy very much your reminiscing and look forward to each chapter.
reply by the author on 02-Apr-2025
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No need for editing. This was fine. Your children will truly love it when your book is done, though I hope it won't be for a long time. I enjoy very much your reminiscing and look forward to each chapter.
Comment Written 02-Apr-2025
reply by the author on 02-Apr-2025
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It won't be for a long time. Raising my boys, has causes numerous stories.
Comment from royowen
Of course my kids, who are now in their forties watched the adventures of Scooby doo and friends when they themselves were young, but good memories are attached to these stuffed toys, so they still have a life of their own, beautifully wrutten Barvara, blessings Roy
reply by the author on 02-Apr-2025
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Of course my kids, who are now in their forties watched the adventures of Scooby doo and friends when they themselves were young, but good memories are attached to these stuffed toys, so they still have a life of their own, beautifully wrutten Barvara, blessings Roy
Comment Written 02-Apr-2025
reply by the author on 02-Apr-2025
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Thank you for the understanding and the support.
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Well done
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Most welcime
Comment from Jasmine Girl
I take it that Steven is your son. It's a cute story about a young man who is still attached to his childhood stuffed animal, only to a certain degree or condition. I'm glad you have fixed it. I think he must fell a lot in common with Scooby Doo, both physically big at least.
Well done.
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reply by the author on 02-Apr-2025
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I take it that Steven is your son. It's a cute story about a young man who is still attached to his childhood stuffed animal, only to a certain degree or condition. I'm glad you have fixed it. I think he must fell a lot in common with Scooby Doo, both physically big at least.
Well done.
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Comment Written 02-Apr-2025
reply by the author on 02-Apr-2025
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Probably true. Thank you for the understanding.
Comment from jessizero
I could almost picture your son with Scooby! It's an amusing thought. I like that he calls you "Mother" when he's frustrated. I enjoy these memories of yours. Thank you so much for sharing, and best wishes to you.
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reply by the author on 02-Apr-2025
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I could almost picture your son with Scooby! It's an amusing thought. I like that he calls you "Mother" when he's frustrated. I enjoy these memories of yours. Thank you so much for sharing, and best wishes to you.
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Comment Written 02-Apr-2025
reply by the author on 02-Apr-2025
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Thank you for the support. I appreciate it.
