Comment from irony007

Excellent

This was a very passionate story that had a taste of poetic bliss throughout it. I felt the romantic interlude was amazing. As a male that sometimes forgets how important romance is in a relationship....plus a wondrous pinch of pure passion, this story peeks my interest and concern for giving my wife something to look forward to; not just someone to be with. Very nicely written.

 Comment Written 23-Mar-2008

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reply by the author on 23-Mar-2008

Thank you irony007. I am thrilled that a man can see the importance of romance and passion. It is a wonderful gift to give and recieve. You comment has made my day. Thank you so much. Zee

Comment from RossJM

Excellent

This is an excellent story, ZeeZee.

Very well thought and written. Nicely done.

Just one observation, if you don't mind:

danced in each others arms -- each other's arms

Regards,
Ross

 Comment Written 23-Mar-2008

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reply by the author on 23-Mar-2008

Thanks RossJM. I appreciate the correction and the comment. I need all the corrections I can get. My editing powers are limited, and my ability to spell in nonexistent. Thanks again for the comment. Zee

Comment from S.T.A

Excellent

Do you really expect an "exceptional?"... If you DO, I can't give it to you!....:) However;

This piece was filled with thoughts that many don't want to ponder.....

W/O criticisms.....

Quite special.

 Comment Written 23-Mar-2008

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reply by the author on 23-Mar-2008

S.T.A, I will take what I can get. This is my first week with Fanstory and I am a bit overwhelmed. I want to thank you for taking the time to read and to comment. Zee

Comment from Teri7

Exceptional

This is a very good and very deep story you have written. You used very good descriptive wording which created very good imagery. It was a joy to read and review. Hugs, Teri

 Comment Written 23-Mar-2008

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reply by the author on 23-Mar-2008

Hi Teri7... I left a note to you in a message but I will say again here how thrilled I am that you spent a 6 star on me and my little piece. Thank you so much. Zee

Comment from hopeishigh

Excellent

I enjoyed this little gem and it was excellent and liked the mystery of the potion that she used for a little happiness even though she had to return to a life without lust and passion to keep her satified, well written and found no snags, great story!!!@

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 Comment Written 23-Mar-2008

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reply by the author on 23-Mar-2008

Ahhh passion... what lurks behind it? Thanks hopeishigh.. your name says it all. Zee