Purgatory's Hill
An English sonnet22 total reviews
Comment from earthlybeing
I love this poem. It flows easily and is so smooth. I like the rhyme is wonderful. It has meaning as you read it and is easy to understand. Wonderfully done. Thanks, Jeanette
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reply by the author on 29-Mar-2008
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I love this poem. It flows easily and is so smooth. I like the rhyme is wonderful. It has meaning as you read it and is easy to understand. Wonderfully done. Thanks, Jeanette
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Comment Written 29-Mar-2008
reply by the author on 29-Mar-2008
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Thank you for such a kind review.
Comment from the_desolate_one
Niiiice... I really enjoyed this piece and the concept of it... everything is great... only thing i suggest is to change the background color to add more visual appeal,,, since its a great poem it would be good to deck it out a bit
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reply by the author on 29-Mar-2008
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Niiiice... I really enjoyed this piece and the concept of it... everything is great... only thing i suggest is to change the background color to add more visual appeal,,, since its a great poem it would be good to deck it out a bit
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Comment Written 28-Mar-2008
reply by the author on 29-Mar-2008
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I'll have to think about that. What color scheme do you suggest? I was using violet for "adultery" and white for "cleansing of sin." Thanks for a great review.