Jamestown Ferry to Suffolk
not all country music is about love24 total reviews
Comment from AbigailDavid
Hello, unusual contest, but this certainly meets the critieria and as an amateur pianist, I think this would work well as lyrics. Best of luck with this entry. Good author notes fill in any gaps for the reader also.
Thanks for sharing your writing, it is a work I would recommend, Abby
reply by the author on 25-May-2008
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Hello, unusual contest, but this certainly meets the critieria and as an amateur pianist, I think this would work well as lyrics. Best of luck with this entry. Good author notes fill in any gaps for the reader also.
Thanks for sharing your writing, it is a work I would recommend, Abby
Comment Written 25-May-2008
reply by the author on 25-May-2008
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thanks, Abby. it was a fun write. love, jan
Comment from starpen
What a great reply to the Barbara Mandrell song. It kind of evens the score a bit, girls, doesn't it. I think its witty and clever and fun. Very well done, Rdfrdmom. This is really as good a piece as i usually find on here and not an easy form to master.
best wishes
Sarpen
reply by the author on 25-May-2008
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What a great reply to the Barbara Mandrell song. It kind of evens the score a bit, girls, doesn't it. I think its witty and clever and fun. Very well done, Rdfrdmom. This is really as good a piece as i usually find on here and not an easy form to master.
best wishes
Sarpen
Comment Written 25-May-2008
reply by the author on 25-May-2008
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thanks, starpen. I love Barbara's music and was actually looking for another one of her songs when I happened upon this one. Since I live so close to Jamestown, I just could not resist this one although I downloaded about 20 other songs to play with. I never even tried another one. My brain kept insisting on working with this one. Love, Jan
Comment from storymama
Oh, I love how you have changed the lyrics of this song to pretty much say the opposite of the original. I'm thinking this song will never make it to the charts. LOL Good luck on the contest. I do not see anything I would change.....unless you want to sing it for us so we can hear the rhythm and beat. Just kidding. God bless.
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reply by the author on 25-May-2008
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Oh, I love how you have changed the lyrics of this song to pretty much say the opposite of the original. I'm thinking this song will never make it to the charts. LOL Good luck on the contest. I do not see anything I would change.....unless you want to sing it for us so we can hear the rhythm and beat. Just kidding. God bless.
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Comment Written 25-May-2008
reply by the author on 25-May-2008
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trust me, storymama, you don't want me singing. LOL. love, jan
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Lol. Ok, Jan. If you're sure. Great job on they lyrics contest anyway. ;) God bless. Laura
Comment from Rajasir
Sometimes inspirations are surpassed by the inspired creations.In this case I feel that your touches to the original have brought out a new aspect altogether.
It is really nice.
Bless you,
Rajasir
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reply by the author on 25-May-2008
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Sometimes inspirations are surpassed by the inspired creations.In this case I feel that your touches to the original have brought out a new aspect altogether.
It is really nice.
Bless you,
Rajasir
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Comment Written 25-May-2008
reply by the author on 25-May-2008
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thanks, Rajasir. love, jan