The Meeting
Scary Fiction29 total reviews
Comment from Nicky B
Don't be too surprised if this is true. The elite few are definitely gorging themselves at the expense of the average Joe. This economic crisis was foreseen and nothing was done about it. Bush throws a three page reason why a trillion dollars should be given to these fat cats without wanting to fend off any detailed questions as to why. There is no proviso to help those in real need of financial help. It is utterly disgraceful. What you have written here scares me but it needs to be written and read. This might be fiction, but like science fiction, it could be a dire vision of the future. Let us hope that there are those with a conscience, who will be able to stop these reptiles in their slimy tracks.
God bless.
Nick.
reply by the author on 24-Sep-2008
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Don't be too surprised if this is true. The elite few are definitely gorging themselves at the expense of the average Joe. This economic crisis was foreseen and nothing was done about it. Bush throws a three page reason why a trillion dollars should be given to these fat cats without wanting to fend off any detailed questions as to why. There is no proviso to help those in real need of financial help. It is utterly disgraceful. What you have written here scares me but it needs to be written and read. This might be fiction, but like science fiction, it could be a dire vision of the future. Let us hope that there are those with a conscience, who will be able to stop these reptiles in their slimy tracks.
God bless.
Nick.
Comment Written 24-Sep-2008
reply by the author on 24-Sep-2008
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I realize that there are people how stand behind the curtain with string attached to little sticks and we hope about to their tune. Sad. Thanks Nick.
Comment from babylonia
zeezee,
LOL it could indeed happen. anything is possible if we can imagine it, others have too. easy to read and follow. no spaggies do i see. imagery is excellent. made me smile. great imagination.
love,
barbara
reply by the author on 24-Sep-2008
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zeezee,
LOL it could indeed happen. anything is possible if we can imagine it, others have too. easy to read and follow. no spaggies do i see. imagery is excellent. made me smile. great imagination.
love,
barbara
Comment Written 24-Sep-2008
reply by the author on 24-Sep-2008
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Thanks Barbara. I hope to bring comedy to this place soon.... well as soon as something happens that is funny. Zee
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zee,
i understand. LOL it needs it. seriously, we all need to laugh more. too much negativity destroys.
love,
barbara
Comment from rhymer1
It works pretty well however, the level would improve by deleting your venom and writing it as if straight. Then it will zing them. Slainte, rhymer1
reply by the author on 24-Sep-2008
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It works pretty well however, the level would improve by deleting your venom and writing it as if straight. Then it will zing them. Slainte, rhymer1
Comment Written 23-Sep-2008
reply by the author on 24-Sep-2008
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Yeah, I considered that. I was going for the backdoor approach. Hoping the reader would fill in the blanks. Probably not. Thanks rhymer.
Comment from Korton
WOW! You certainly hit the mark on this one ZeeZee. Why on earth did you call this fiction, though. We both know that this scenario is probably playing out as I read this. Such a great job you've done with this one. Outstanding!
reply by the author on 23-Sep-2008
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WOW! You certainly hit the mark on this one ZeeZee. Why on earth did you call this fiction, though. We both know that this scenario is probably playing out as I read this. Such a great job you've done with this one. Outstanding!
Comment Written 23-Sep-2008
reply by the author on 23-Sep-2008
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Dang, I am putting on my sunglasses and changing my phone number as we speak..Not that I am paranoid. ha ha.. thanks for much for the 6er.. dang.. a 6 is a blessed thing to receive in fanstory.. thank you mucho..
Comment from Nightwind1
This is an excellent look at the world today. I, like you, hope that this is fiction but I have my doubts about it today. I enjoyed the story.
reply by the author on 23-Sep-2008
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This is an excellent look at the world today. I, like you, hope that this is fiction but I have my doubts about it today. I enjoyed the story.
Comment Written 23-Sep-2008
reply by the author on 23-Sep-2008
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Thanks Nightwind1, I, too, hope it is fiction. One never knows in this world climate. Thank you for reading and commenting. ZeeZee
Comment from pingeyez2
What a wonderul masterpice thats explains the plight of the World.Zee , you have expressed the feelings of millions of others in a concise mantra of deceit and cleverness.
The Meeting was so easy to follow , and the anticpation of what comes next didn't dissapoint. When I say I can't wait for Zee's next expose is testimony of a great mind.
reply by the author on 23-Sep-2008
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What a wonderul masterpice thats explains the plight of the World.Zee , you have expressed the feelings of millions of others in a concise mantra of deceit and cleverness.
The Meeting was so easy to follow , and the anticpation of what comes next didn't dissapoint. When I say I can't wait for Zee's next expose is testimony of a great mind.
Comment Written 23-Sep-2008
reply by the author on 23-Sep-2008
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pingeyez2, you are most generous. A six star is precious commodity in this place. I thank you much. This subject pains me but I am compelled to write about it. Thank you so much for reading and understanding the magnitude of the possibility. ZeeZee
Comment from Lejunna
I love the story. I like to read on this subject, Witches, vampires, werewolves, ghost, etc. I would love to read more of your writings. I am really interested in them. I don't read to often but your story keeped my interest, and now I want more. but that is what writers do, keep you wanting more.
reply by the author on 23-Sep-2008
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I love the story. I like to read on this subject, Witches, vampires, werewolves, ghost, etc. I would love to read more of your writings. I am really interested in them. I don't read to often but your story keeped my interest, and now I want more. but that is what writers do, keep you wanting more.
Comment Written 23-Sep-2008
reply by the author on 23-Sep-2008
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Thank you for those kind words, Lejunna. My objective is to always entertain. Thanks you so much for reading and commenting. ZeeZee
Comment from jeslaf
tiny flags adoring lapels [adorning?]
sheeple--tell me, please, that you love Michael Savage?!
When you ask for the report from each sector, some end in ?s, some not. It should probably all be ?s. Some are in quotes, some not. It should probably all be ""s. I'm OCD. Sorry.
I agree whole-heartedly and love your take on this mess we're in. New World Order sonsabitches . . . you ain't far off, I'd wager. Another great, sarcastic Z piece. Love it!
reply by the author on 23-Sep-2008
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tiny flags adoring lapels [adorning?]
sheeple--tell me, please, that you love Michael Savage?!
When you ask for the report from each sector, some end in ?s, some not. It should probably all be ?s. Some are in quotes, some not. It should probably all be ""s. I'm OCD. Sorry.
I agree whole-heartedly and love your take on this mess we're in. New World Order sonsabitches . . . you ain't far off, I'd wager. Another great, sarcastic Z piece. Love it!
Comment Written 23-Sep-2008
reply by the author on 23-Sep-2008
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Thanks for the heads up dear. I will rush to fix. I worked on this most of the day.. I am blind to it now. Thanks. And who is Michael Savage???
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He's an AM talk radio news guy, independent but leaning conservative. He's a Jewish guy from the Bronx (or Brooklyn, can't remember) and he sounds just as you'd imagine, accent and all. He doesn't think at all before he speaks which makes for some very funny political/news commentary. He pisses everyone off, and I enjoy him. He's out of CA, goes on 7-10 pm in FL. He says "sheeple" all the time, thought maybe you were a fan. : )
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I fixed the spaggies and no I have never heard of him. I borrowed the term from a fellow writer. Perhaps she is a fan. Thanks hon. Zee
Comment from adewpearl
You have good gut instincts if you ask me, not an overactive imagination. I love your rants. On the one hand they are highly creative and entertaining, and on the other hand, they depress the hell out of me! spag vipers din viper's den
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reply by the author on 23-Sep-2008
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You have good gut instincts if you ask me, not an overactive imagination. I love your rants. On the one hand they are highly creative and entertaining, and on the other hand, they depress the hell out of me! spag vipers din viper's den
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Comment Written 23-Sep-2008
reply by the author on 23-Sep-2008
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Thanks for the heads up on the spaggie.. I am sorry if I depress you. It is not my intention. Thank you for reading and giving me the much needed assistance in editing. ZeeZee
