Feed Yourself and Your neighbor.
Surviving the world-wide shortages.22 total reviews
Comment from Kit Minden
The rhyming patterns are so strong that the un-rhymed lines such as line 5 feel out of sync to my ear. The last triplet also feels a little out of rhythm. Otherwise, enjoyed this apropos read :)
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reply by the author on 22-Oct-2008
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The rhyming patterns are so strong that the un-rhymed lines such as line 5 feel out of sync to my ear. The last triplet also feels a little out of rhythm. Otherwise, enjoyed this apropos read :)
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Comment Written 22-Oct-2008
reply by the author on 22-Oct-2008
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Hello Kit, I am a simple person and not terrific with understanding some of your words to me: I am self-taught and try my best to impart my thoughts to you. Perhaps it's the old-age syndrome fogging my fingers on the computer. Thank you so much for your review it is much appreciated. Kind Regards Aussie XX (grey nomad!)
Comment from rayrobertj
Hi Aussie, This is your friend Ray.I love your poem and that line, if you bury your head in sandy soil it will not grow. Can I use that for my book on Sound Advice.I want to nominate you. I can't figure it out
reply by the author on 22-Oct-2008
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Hi Aussie, This is your friend Ray.I love your poem and that line, if you bury your head in sandy soil it will not grow. Can I use that for my book on Sound Advice.I want to nominate you. I can't figure it out
Comment Written 22-Oct-2008
reply by the author on 22-Oct-2008
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Hullo my friend Ray, You are such a sweetie; thank you for rating me with six stars - I am honored. Love Aussie XX